| "Mountain Retreat" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you define Aya's glares of death. This has been a fun read, thank you! Can I come play in your basement?
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
what no lemon-longness? just mentions of hot sex and a tiny scene? Aw... shame on you!
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Reviewed By: koneko-chan88 On: October 05, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Can't wait for the lemon! Aya-uke please?
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Reviewed By: batexp On: August 31, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am sending you this note to keep with your stories. one should write for your own joy.do not stop, because others don't write, i enjoy your story so for so keep up the good work. i've written some and the reveiws are nice but to start and to finish a tale is joy in its self a good job to a writer. never give up in anything you do.
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: August 30, 2004 19:37 CDT
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Definetely a good story, please continue. I am interesting to see how the little 'fight' ends between Yohji and Aya. :0)
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyable! Hope you consider posting more. I'd like to see how the end of the fight turns out now that Aya has Yohji pinned. :^D
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Reviewed By: Mistress Wraithe On: August 18, 2004 08:25 CDT
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More please!
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 19:35 CDT
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i think that this is a good story. I like the humor between Aya and Yohji. PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE I REALLY LIKE THE STORY!!!! THANX
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute but i know there is more to chapter 2 so where is it? oh and make sure to add to ur disclaimer that u dont own the songs, just to cover your butt. i cant wait for the next chapter, hope ideas are working for u! Andee
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