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| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 ] | Title: starearle
Reviewed By: starearle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this isn't a review per say. I really enjoy fanfiction. I personal have no talent for it, so I look forward to people like yourself for it. Write because you love it. Please give of your talent, I know that I would miss it if you didn't. Oh by the way I love this story please continue. Thanks
| Reviewed By: twishinky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 07:51 EDT
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Tsuki-kins, sweetie, I swear I will sic the Battousai, a deranged Aoshi and a food deprived Sano after you if you don't update this!!!!! Argh! Wanna know how good this is? You've singlehandedly driven away my concentration for working (again!) cause I had to read this as soon as I got to my PC! Dangerous... very dangerous... but worth it!!! Please, please, don't ever get the urge to stop writing... it will be a great loss to all fanfiction readers ;) Take care *huggity*
| Reviewed By: twishinky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my stars!!! this is so hot its a wonder my monitor is still working... and I'm just on the first chapter! sorry haven't left you word in so long... I'm wondering if you're in good health... i really hope and pray that you are--- anemia sucks, i have it as well... Anyway, hear from you soon!!! i love this fic... You just keep on getting better, dear friend!
| Reviewed By: just another AK fan On: August 10, 2004 04:20 EDT
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I didn't put ratings. I don't like them, they don't mean much here. I have recently stumbled upon your story and was dismayed to read that you may not be continuing it. There aren't that many A/K stories out there and most of them are unfinished, it would be sad to see one as enjoyable as this one left to join them. Even if there aren't many people responding to your story, as long as there are a few is that not enough? Are you still enjoying your story? I'm sorry, these comments sound a little pretentious, I would just rather you didn't stop writing your story I suppose. On a regular note, I like Kaoru's combination of shy/strong, rather than just pigeonholing her as loud and confident; I like what you've done with her character. Sano's appearance was amusing, as Sano usually is (endearing little rooster head that he is). I wonder how it will play out if/when Aoshi realizes/confronts/whatever that in raping Kaoru he has acted little better than that man in the diner. The Aoshi/Kaoru scenes are ALL great (want more... :). Aoshi's dialogue at times seems a little OOC (lots of slang and other stuff, mostly in the very beginning), but *shrug* a certain amount of that is normal in any AU (particularly Aoshi, I think); I still just can't imagine him saying "ragdoll" but I will keep trying! :) Wow, I suppose this is long enough already. I don't check mediaminer regularly but I hope that when I come back I will get to read more of your story!
| Reviewed By: Ayapon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue with this story as there are few Kaoru/Aoshi fics written with imagination, deftness, and skill. I am truly enjoying reading this!
| Title: This is Kanzen ne Tsuki
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 22:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is just Me, Kanzen ne Tsuki aka Mangetsu, wanting to let everyone whose reading know how much I appreciate them and their interest in the story. I wanted to say thank-you for the Reviews and hope that a few more people will drop me a line and let me know what they think. I'm a glutton for Reviews... I love to read them. I love the fans who send them. God Bless, everyone. Tsuki-san
| Reviewed By: ......... On: August 07, 2004 20:55 EDT
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I really enjoy this fic, and I hpe you update soon as well. Don't let people not reviewing get you down, lots of people don't do it. Keep up the wonderful work! And also, though I'm into aoshi/kaoru fics, this one I am into nd I like it very much.
| Title: The Black Hawke
Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: August 07, 2004 12:11 EDT
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AHHHHH! no, please don't give up on this! it's too good! i havn't read a kao/aoshi story as good as this ever! anyway...great chapter! got a peek into aoshi's normal life and the diner scene was just awesome. I LOVE BANANA PANCAKES!
| Title: Noooooooo!
Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 23:16 EDT
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Did I not already tell you not to even threaten to stop?! Argh!!! Please don't!! I'm begging you! I love this story way too much for you to stop, and I have to know if Aoshi and Kaoru get together all happily and stuff. Still an awesome story (I wasn't exactly expecting it to change), and I can't wait for the next chapter (so please please PLEASE don't stop!!! Continue, and update soon! Otherwise I will hunt you down and force you to continue at gunpoint. Well first I'd buy a gun, THEN hunt you down and stuff. But you really don't want to make me get off my lazy ass and actually have to DO something like that, do you? Thought not. So Keep going with this story!
| Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: August 06, 2004 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! Aoshi is her knight in shining armor! This was a great chapter for character development. Aoshi is a superb business man...and Kaour is SPECIAL to him! Aww!!! Maybe he'll find out where she lives now...or something! I like Misao and Kaoru's breakfast....two past boyfriends would have loved to marry her...but it looks like no one has been able or will be able to satisfy her but AOSHI! AKA the Black Hawke! I hope you do chapter 6, getting to be even more intricate of a plot...it's not all about Aoshi and Kaoru's sex life after all! :-P
| Title: This story rocks!
Reviewed By: DarkGodessAluthri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fucking awesome. One of the best stories of any kind I have ever read, and trust me, I've read a lot. Don't ever even consider not continuing this. I know you haven't threatened to, but I'm just saying don't. I usually hate Aoshi with anybody but Misao (though I don't come across many that aren't M/A) but for this fic, I have to say I honestly do not care. I like it better than every M/A I've ever read, as it leaves them far behind in the dust. Your writing skills are phenomenal, and I feel like I'm in the story with the characters. They all seem so real, and when they hurt, I hurt. That sounds like such a corny statement, but I really can't describe it any other way. The 1500 character limit is going to severely restrict how much I can praise your story, because all the words in the world could not possible even begin to describe this masterpeice. If you changed the names, you could seriously get this published. You put just enough suspense in there to keep me on the edge of my seat, wanting to read more, yet you don't over-do the suspense, like so many other writers in thier desperate attempt to keep people's interest (it usually just ends up frusterating and boring me at the same time). The details you put in are subtle and descriptive, giving the reader a better understanding of the scene, yet you do not take up an entire paragraph describing a chair and detracting from the more important main point of the scene. And I have to stop my rambling. (evil limit!) | Title: The Black Hawke
Reviewed By: jennni4kl On: August 05, 2004 08:00 EDT
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wow, really good and lemony. more please!
| Title: ch 3 and 4
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Torture...absolute torture....kaoru doesnt think he cares at all...which he didn't until she started talking. She's def not the sort of woman he normally wasted his time with. He needs to go to the diner and become more involved in her life. I love Sano...who betrayed them???
| Reviewed By: Sephiress On: August 03, 2004 00:14 EDT
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as usual, completly kick ass writing from tsuki-san. loved every second of it and all the things i said when i guina pig-read it before still stand. i cant wait til u put out material i havnt read, but for now, the first few chapters are still holding my attention. great work my friend Sephiress
| Title: ch2
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 13:41 EDT
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You know if its anything with Aoshi and Kaoru that I'll read it! This is way dark...and Aoshi is way psycho! But he did have his crazy moments in the anime. Kaoru....seems OOC, but I guess it works for this dark flavor.
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