| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: Don't worry about it
Reviewed By: Caskas_Lyrik On: May 03, 2005 20:24 EDT
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Your writing is soo great...I would wait years for another chapter..(hopefully its not that long) but I would still wait. Take the time you need and concentrate on your family...All your views will still be here when you return (well at least me) =) Take care and God bless!
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Title: Best Wishes
Reviewed By: AngelAngel On: April 26, 2005 10:25 EDT
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Take your time, family is more important. My thoughts & best wishes goes out to you & your family (may you all be safe and healthy). Good luck.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: April 26, 2005 09:59 EDT
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good luck with everything
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Reviewed By: tameka On: April 26, 2005 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im fine with waiting for this great fic to get updated...i love it and will wait until ur personal life gives u time to sit and write...Is it ok for me to wish ur family good luck???
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: April 25, 2005 21:24 EDT
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I was totally fooled...thought it was an update. I'm sure your son will have a good time in Japan and I'll keep the other military men in your family in my thoughts. Best of luck with all that! I'm excited about my childhood best friend coming back next month from his two year stay in Japan with the marines...he's only been there for a year....but still.
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 19:08 EDT
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Well I certainly didn't see that coming! I liked the little Kaoru/Aoshi scene. I hate this Becca from his past. His past before Kaoru should cease to exist. Now...the Kenshin/Misao...I actually found it hilliarious. I can not imagine a man spanking a woman though. Seriously, she should have grabbed hold of his crotch and twisted. That would have stopped him. Their scene was pretty sweet though.
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Reviewed By: solarscorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 19:18 EDT
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i love this story! i hope you update soon! keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: usullusa On: April 07, 2005 18:42 EDT
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Squee~ Why would anyone flame you for this chapter? It's so... I dunno. The word isn't coming to me. Misao and Kenshin make a good pair in terms of plot. It'll be lots of fun to read about them (and their arguments XD) Thanks for the great fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Some Person On: April 03, 2005 03:02 EDT
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Awww you updated! I absolutely loved this chapter! It was so good with the pairing because both personalities just worked so well! Congrats! It was a real treat to read!
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Title: hiii again
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 17:10 EST
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Yeah....i just wanted 2 let u no that I AM SOOO HOOKED ON UR FIC THAT I ACTUALLY READ IT 5x & I'M GOIN' 4 A 6th...LOLOL....it's what i do when im waitin' 4 updates ^O^!!!...I also wanted 2 mention that after readin' it soo many times....I've finally come 2 the conclusion that ur fic would make a grand-slammin' movie!!!....seriously!!!..lol....hope u update soon....2 stop me from goin' crazy of course!!! ~-^!!!
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Title: ABSOLUTELY AMAZING
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 10:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely one of the best fics I have ever read in my entire life!!!! I have not laughed so much during a story in such a long time. Your plot, characters, and basically the entire story line is ingenious!!! I really hope you do not leave it like this because that would just be plain cruel. Update as soon as possible please!!!! [=
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:37 EST
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I really like your fic, just the way your write it makes me want to read. The sentences aren't to complex and you still give a very good image of what things look like without bombarding the reader with descriptions. Please update soon, it's killing me. Oh and one more thing, is Saito gonna be in it. I have seen all the other characters but him and I am really wanting a saito well unless you weren't going to use him >.< lol well later and please update soon
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Title: UUUHHH...
Reviewed By: ~Soph~Lady~ On: March 24, 2005 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I told u already dat I lyke da storie but I juzt don't lyke da pairin. Kenshin n Misao iz kind of ummmm...odd? But I luv da Kaoru n Aoshi pairin. Dis storie iz so good good luck ta ya wit it!
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Reviewed By: Metal Shaolin On: March 23, 2005 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really likey , it has such an interesting plot that i wanta keep reading KEEP POSTING
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Title: WHY??
Reviewed By: Blonde B-Ball Star On: March 20, 2005 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh GOD... that was the most tedious thing I have ever made myself read through.. I was going between hiting the computer and writting a very ugly flame.. but great writting style I applaud you on how you still are able to MAKE myself read through a chapter in HOPES of some Kaoru... but alas... WHY KENSHIN.... make some other person..... grrr I hate it when she hooks up with people who are actually on the show.... breaths calmly... She DOESN'T deserve Kenshin..... calm breaths.... UMMM GREAT CHAPTER.... I mean it does set up something that will hopefully be usefull in other chapters???? Hopefully??? That is the FIRST Misao centered chapter I have read besides one I wrote which has her being dumped.... LOL... but this is NOT a flame I just hate Misao getting anyone.... I know... I know... Sounds pretty uhh evil of me?? But that is just how I am.... I have to saw you have a LOVELY writting style and I can not wait for the next chapter of this OR the next chapter of 'Life at Saito's Ranch' wink wink.... no actually you and Belle both update quite frequently with that and I have been very impressed by your ability's to mold each chapter into a wonderful tale... I don't think I have ever reviewed it though but rest assured I will..... just when I have time.... and umm can't wait for the next Kaoru centric chapter of this story... alas another WINK WINK lol... well I am out now and thankd you for e-mailing me I very much so appreciate it.... Peace!!!!
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