| "The Black Hawke" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 15:37 EST
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I really like your fic, just the way your write it makes me want to read. The sentences aren't to complex and you still give a very good image of what things look like without bombarding the reader with descriptions. Please update soon, it's killing me. Oh and one more thing, is Saito gonna be in it. I have seen all the other characters but him and I am really wanting a saito well unless you weren't going to use him >.< lol well later and please update soon
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Title: UUUHHH...
Reviewed By: ~Soph~Lady~ On: March 24, 2005 19:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I told u already dat I lyke da storie but I juzt don't lyke da pairin. Kenshin n Misao iz kind of ummmm...odd? But I luv da Kaoru n Aoshi pairin. Dis storie iz so good good luck ta ya wit it!
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Reviewed By: Metal Shaolin On: March 23, 2005 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really likey , it has such an interesting plot that i wanta keep reading KEEP POSTING
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Title: WHY??
Reviewed By: Blonde B-Ball Star On: March 20, 2005 18:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh GOD... that was the most tedious thing I have ever made myself read through.. I was going between hiting the computer and writting a very ugly flame.. but great writting style I applaud you on how you still are able to MAKE myself read through a chapter in HOPES of some Kaoru... but alas... WHY KENSHIN.... make some other person..... grrr I hate it when she hooks up with people who are actually on the show.... breaths calmly... She DOESN'T deserve Kenshin..... calm breaths.... UMMM GREAT CHAPTER.... I mean it does set up something that will hopefully be usefull in other chapters???? Hopefully??? That is the FIRST Misao centered chapter I have read besides one I wrote which has her being dumped.... LOL... but this is NOT a flame I just hate Misao getting anyone.... I know... I know... Sounds pretty uhh evil of me?? But that is just how I am.... I have to saw you have a LOVELY writting style and I can not wait for the next chapter of this OR the next chapter of 'Life at Saito's Ranch' wink wink.... no actually you and Belle both update quite frequently with that and I have been very impressed by your ability's to mold each chapter into a wonderful tale... I don't think I have ever reviewed it though but rest assured I will..... just when I have time.... and umm can't wait for the next Kaoru centric chapter of this story... alas another WINK WINK lol... well I am out now and thankd you for e-mailing me I very much so appreciate it.... Peace!!!!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 18:03 EST
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Wow, nice chapter. It's so cute Kenshin and Misao
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Reviewed By: Evil DM On: March 19, 2005 11:22 EST
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I discovered this story at about eight AM on Saturday, and sat here, reading the damn thing straght through. I can't say I've found many fics that are in the same league as this. I'm normally not much for this pairing, but I've found I enjoy your twist on it. The plot is amazing, and entirely plausable, which makes it a real pleasure to read. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not going to let you not finish this. Damn good job.
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Title: ; )
Reviewed By: AngelAngel On: March 19, 2005 07:31 EST
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Aoshi is so whipped (hee hee whip cream) and Kenshi is acting like a caveman on a full moon (ha ha ha .... i like ... grins like mad). Won't A/K get a "noisy" surprise when they get back (those 4 people just look so cute together ... and like opposite attracts). It's so ad that Aoshi is scarred by his past to say those words ... but when he does i'm sure it will be all the more sweeter to Kaoru (more scene on them pls). Love the interactio between K/M it's so funny. You are totally going down as one of my most fav writer. Looking forward to your next chpt. It's great to you are enjoying your writing coz it shows in the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: ...... On: March 17, 2005 02:04 EST
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I didn't feel old until the cartoons I watched as a kid appeared as "Old School" on Nickelodeon. Anyway, I love the banter between Kenshin and Misao, sure, his staying around is sweet but I say he should stay wtih Misao for comic relieve. Meanwhile, I dislike Aoshi's inner struggle; I don't like seeing him hurt like that but his answer was good...yeah. ^.^ I loved this chapter as much as I do the rest--though I wished it was a A/K scene at the end...but...I still enjoyed it and I can't wait tell more! And don't feel old, just switch the numbers around on your age--except for the ages like mine (instead of 18 I'd be 81 ^.^;;;). Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: catti-dono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 23:08 EST
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LAUGHS; dont read AFF review; this baka was a baka; Im so glad that you went with your heart on this...screw the flames, koishi, this is what you wanted and you did it...does it not feel good?
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Reviewed By: tameka On: March 16, 2005 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i say anymore?...my ratings speak for themselves....i read two of ur fics on fanfic.net..Bad kid and Do you?....i was hoping for more Aoshi/Kaoru or even Soujiro and his sis in this chap but the develpement of Mi/Ken relationship was a good subsitute...i liked the chap...keep it up....
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Reviewed By: jenni4kl On: March 16, 2005 17:32 EST
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Hmm, this was an interesting one Mangetsu-san. I don't really know what to think of the M/K pairing, it tasted a bit different on my tongue, heeheeheehee. Do you not like Misao-channy? Idk...it sounds to me that you don't like her! Demo, the chapter was top-quality as usual! Kepp up the awesome work master-of-lemons!
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Title: Awesome Chapter!
Reviewed By: Caskas Lyrik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Chapter...just so you know I am Oneida..I just got an account so I will review under this name =) I am glad you got an idea from my previous review! This chapter was great as usual...nothing but the best comes from your writing! I am glad there was a break from Kay and Aoshi and I was wondering when there was going to be a chapter where Kenshin/Misao hooked up. The way you have created new personalities for character already with a typical "Personality" (If that makes sense) is wonderful and innovating! Please don't take that long to update this time...I was in agony waiting for another chapter ;) Take Care!
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Title: GREAT STORY
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 14:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter!i revied at the other site!but i soo wanted to review here too!i like where the story is going(mmm where is it going?)i like it anyway!please update soon and good luck
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Reviewed By: Sarah-chan On: March 16, 2005 13:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOO GOOD. oh man keshin was soo mean but soo sweet, i was soo happy for misao and kenshin, it was soo passionate *keeps rambling abt how much of a writer u are*
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Title: Awesome Chapter!
Reviewed By: Caskas Lyrik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Chapter...just so you know I am Oneida..I just got an account so I will review under this name =) I am glad you got an idea from my previous review! This chapter was great as usual...nothing but the best comes from your writing! I am glad there was a break from Kay and Aoshi and I was wondering when there was going to be a chapter where Kenshin/Misao hooked up. The way you have created new personalities for character already with a typical "Personality" (If that makes sense) is wonderful and innovating! Please don't take that long to update this time...I was in agony waiting for another chapter ;) Take Care!
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