| "Distortion::Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady_Niongi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, please cont' you just kinda left me hanging lol good job!!!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Fascinating. I really like the idea, and the way you described the scene was enthralling. No grammer mess ups, and so far, everything makes perfect sense. You have to update this soon or I will stick Eclipse on you, 'cuz it is awesome!
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Reviewed By: DuosAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 01:06 CDT
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this is really good. you got the characters down perfectly. please update soon.
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Title: Wheeeeee
Reviewed By: Yamainu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good! You need to update pleaaaaaaaaaaaase! -puppy dog raenef eyes-
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Neko_Youkai On: October 02, 2004 18:22 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: September 30, 2004 02:15 CDT
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ooo great chapter. please keep up the great work! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Shoko(Child of Ice) On: September 20, 2004 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeel* Ohh toooo good!!! What a wonderful ideaXD Right more quickly! Please please pleeeeaaase!!!! Hmm... doesn't Eclipse have garnet eyes? I liked the part where Rae was trying to seduce himXD
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Reviewed By: Ebony Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 17:50 CDT
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Write more!!!! This is great! please dont stop here!!!! I have to see what Eclipse will do to the prince!!! will he blow him up? Ignore him? Blast him into a million peices? What?!
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Reviewed By: Ardwynna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 04:08 CDT
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You can't stop here! I need more! It's so enticing, just a snippet of the big picture. Please don't abandon this fic!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 18:31 CDT
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Arggh! I have to know how Eclipse is going to react. Will he just ignore the prince or smite him horrifically? And what about the owner of the establishment? Very interesting start.
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eclipse is scary... The prince is a brat what else is new? This is a different way of seeing how him and tall-dark-and-handsome met. I think I can see what's coming. But our loveable demon lord a pleasure slave? -sniff sniff- I pitty the poor boy. I like where this is going and ask you to update as soon as you see fit. Not may people know about Demon Diary so there might not be many reviews but the ones who know what thier talking about and such shall be loyal. Like my self. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: The Random Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE THIS FIC!! -adds to favorites- Please update soon!!!!
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