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Title: Butt Naked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yaoi Sex Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To Late Babe I can already tell there are gonna be people bug you for a lemon, and come on you can't sit there and tell me you don't imageine Inu-Yasha butt naked.......Hmm butt naked Sesso *Drifts off into Hentia lala Land* Um Great story bye *With perverted grin on her face Yaoi prances off thoughts of naked Anime men filling her head*
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaoi Sex Goddess has such good lemon ideas and i just want to have a lemon with inuyasha and kagome but i casn wait if you just put up more chapters please!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: domozhirova221 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^o^ AWESOME! WRITE MORE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:05 EDT
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Here's my view on the quarter youkai/half youkai stuff. I would think that weather or not you are a youkai would be determined by more than one gene. So even if Inuyasha were to mate with Kagome, the child can have any ammount of youkai , although it would be labeled as a quarter youkai. Buy you're right. It is your story--a good one too--and you can do what you want with it. //////////////// I'm a little confused on their relationship, though. The chapter before, Kagome really disliked Inuyasha, and now she feels safe with him. Inuyasha's actions contradict his thoughts, and he's letting himself be ruled by his libido. I'm just wondering if you were gonna explain or fix that. //////////// Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greta hop you update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Yaoi Sex Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 00:09 EDT
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I love as much here as I did when it was on FF.Net, Hey Babe it's me Yaoi Sex Goddess. And just like last time I have to ask.....Did you you think about that lemon I asked you about, now I know your more then likely rolling your eyes at my pervertedness but I want a lemon and I wanna watch Kagome and Inu-Yasha have sex. Me and You and The Monk can be in the bushes and we can watch and tape it and take pictures and then look back on it years from now when we're old and feeble and can't have sex or we can give to our grandkids so they can watch it and become just as big of Hentai's as us. *Big sad wobbley eyes* Please? *More Wobbley eyes* Well anyway great story. BYE^_____^!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lost one On: August 12, 2004 23:52 EDT
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so.... when's the next update?
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE?
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE! I liked it! nice to know Inuyasha cares for her! Koga is such an ass! lol! But anyways keep updating!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was great keep up the good work update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: Assh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! Me likey this idea of yours. It's too bad that she's stuck here tough, ne? I would hate to leave everything I knew behind me to be in a country I where I could honestly say I was lonely in.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! Great story as usual!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 03:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story!hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: A genetics geek On: August 11, 2004 02:30 EDT
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Its not possible to make a quarter youkai you are either all nothing or in between there is no 3 quarters or quarter youkai, the only time you see quarter anything is with nationality.
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Reviewed By: WaterGoddess9 (not signed in) On: August 05, 2004 22:55 EDT
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I think it's a really great story. You have a nice plot, but some things were just a tad confusing...like the cafe...which era was it? Lol...but besides that. It's great so far. Take care and thanks for reading my horrible fiction.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, this is so sad but tender at the same time. Cant wait to read more!
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