| "To See You Again" Reviews/Comments [ 130 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 03:49 CDT
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Kawaii! That part was just to sweet. I can hardly wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: September 05, 2004 10:55 CDT
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I'm really glad that Heero is being so patient with Duo. Duo has quite a bit of issues to work through and I'm sure that Heero would be there for him all the way. =)
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 23:55 CDT
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Getting better and better. I can't wait for the next part and happy b-day!
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 23:03 CDT
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The reason I was asking why you were taking it so fast was just the way you have them acting.
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is progressing beautifully. Just today I was telling my sister about yours story and how great it is to read each chapter. So I am very happy to see you added new chapter again. I will wait impatiently for more. Good work
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Title: Great chapter
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is progressing beautifully. Just today I was telling my sister about yours story and how great it is to read each chapter. So I am very happy to see you added new chapter again. I will wait impatiently for more. Good work
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Reviewed By: priscel *appears in a wisp of smoke* On: September 02, 2004 11:13 CDT
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I am such a hentai!! I'm all for Duo and Heero hooking up and banging each other like wild rabbed bunnies in heat but I do feel that needy-clingy Duo is pushing things way too fast yet at the same time I feel that it's ok 'cause Heero is willing to do what Duo wants. but it is a little fast, I think that Duo is feeling very insecure and goads Heero into a sexual-penatrative part of their relationship with Duo constantly thinking he's going to be on his back *stops her self from adding to much detail and laughs sheepishly*. When it happens between them it should ya know just 'happen' and they should be comfortable. hmm... Duo has been forciful in this whole sex thing with heero and through this whole ordeal Duo has revealed that the incidences of rape really REALLY got to him and that strong exterior was just a mask. So I have to wonder if, it may not happen but it does happen alot with victims, Duo will end up taking back the control and power he lost from heero?! Especially since Heero has offered up his V to him. They are so drawn to eachother, i can't help but wonder if more complications will follow, or the bastard that hurt Duo will pop out of nowhere screw them both over or like I said above, that duo doesn't know how to really deal with the pain he's suffered and takes it out on a very compliant Heero?!?! Thank you for the update and the acknowledgement, more please!
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Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 04:55 CDT
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I like this story and how you bring in other characters but keep it to pretty much the same pace. I must say though, you are makeing Heero and Duo's relationship a little fast don't you think?
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 02:33 CDT
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Awww that wsa so cute. I did feel kinda bad for Duo-Chan when he accidently knocked them into the fountian. Oh well wet bishis to drool over! Great job can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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correction orig./Creativity should be the above ^^^^
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smirks* man... heero in leather! This is a very interesting fic and hey *pouts and looks hurt* you ransom the next chapters... well i guess but the story is interesting worth the ransom. Sometimes in reading the story I notice that some of the words were missing but implied through context of the sentence. It was a little akward, but regardless of this its a wonderful story and I'm Duo is getting more comfortable and feels a lot more like good ol'Duo. I hope you update soon!!!
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Title: Lady moon
Reviewed By: LadyMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Its really enjoyble to read. I hope you update soon. Ja ne, for now.
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: August 22, 2004 10:41 CDT
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Wow! Half a million to spend?! *sigh* I could do with that type of money *grins* I'm really glad to see them getting along so well. It's sad to hear that the updates would not be so regular but........sigh.......I just hope that you wouldn't forget this story. Ja ne~
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Title: Great new chapter ;)
Reviewed By: TKM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay the progress is slow but it is very interesting to read it. I love each chapter you are adding and I will wait for more and more every day even with your school. :) Good work
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 03:28 CDT
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Yippy another yummy chapter! Can't wait to see more but I understand that education must come first.
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