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Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2009 21:44 CST
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... yes... I can picture Inuyasha yelling "WHO'S YOUR DADDY!!!" ... and I died of laughter... I must say, out of all the lemons I've read, all of the GOOD ones (not the crappy half-assed attempt with the "NO flames cuz I cry!" freaking shit) have great, funny disclaimers. It's a good tip! ^__~ And you, my friend, had a good disclaimer! This was one of the juciest lemons I've ever had the ::pleasure:: of reading!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: the story.........
Reviewed By: Yashasgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 16:46 CDT
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FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! oh and that little comment at the end i can so totally see him screaming that "WHOSE YOUR DADDY?!?!?" Anywho great srory!
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 21:28 CDT
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I read this before...was that on ffn? Probably. I practically Live there. Anyway...FUCKING AMAZING! God damn it, I would so let Inu have his way with me if I knew he was gonna do that...sorry being creepy. But, damn! You have written one of my ultimate fantasies. OK, I need to shut up now, cuz you really don't need to know this. Amazing story! You have fucking talent!!
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Reviewed By: Ash T On: October 25, 2006 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Amazing! I love when writers focus on InuYasah being a dom. character and kagome submitting to him. I like that kind of stuff. *Fans self* So wish I could see my boyfriend right now, lmao. Again, amazing, I definatly looking for more of your writing.
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Title: WHO"S UR DADDY!!
Reviewed By: InuHanyouRaeRae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CAN TOTALY SEE HIM YELLING THAT!!! (4 sum reason i cant get the immage of him yelling that while riding on a horse at the same time.) Good story. I like my pupies when they are aggresive.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: 13lackangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow that was fucking amazing!!! The greatest lemom i've read!! Plz wrote more like this plz!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaand kagome with flowers On: June 27, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this one-shot..it's really good! keep wrighting in the future..yuor good! :p
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Reviewed By: Kitsunesan(nsi) On: May 04, 2006 17:54 CDT
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Kinda liked it.. didnt like the fact that he forced himself on her. but yeah. i liked it.
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Reviewed By: Seiyuki Narimaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 12:03 CST
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I loved the story and I have do something and that is :TAKE A VERY VERY VERY COLD SHOWER!!! I wanna read some more stories from you
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Reviewed By: kay mil On: March 15, 2005 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a very good job on this story to be your first to poast. I really hope to find some of your lemons on the sess/kag schichan's fancfic site. To get here, go to yahoo and type sesshomaru mated with kagome. Then press enter. The fourth result it should say "Schichan's Inuyasha Fanfic Site". To find my favorite, go to the bottom of the screen and click M-Y. It will be the seventh one called "Dreams" by a person named Nefra. The sequal to it is right under it but I haven't read it yet. When I finish I'll tell yu how it is. I haven't yet written a story yet but when I do I'll tell you where to find it. Until then hit me up at kelly_grey2003@yahoo.com. don't talk about the lemons just infur them because that is my mom's e-mail.You can call me Kay. I hope you will be able to hit me up later and show me some of your work you haven'y posted yet.
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: Darkangel2379 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 15:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....I need to get a boyfriend now. *laughs* I really liked this! somehow I can't see inuyasha yelling WHO'S YOURE DADDY but it's funny to think about! I like it when inuyasha's a ruffian(I think I'm like kagome if you know what I mean ^_~)anyway,loved it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:03 CDT
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-also dies laughing- omg! yes! i can so see him saying that! lol -laughs for no reason- god im hyper! ^_^ i enjoyed that! but i g2g visit MY kouga! ^_^ byebye -waves- -walks off to find kouga-
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, great story. I never imagined Inuyasha that ... rough, but it was an interesting factor to take into account. I really enjoyed reading the story, anyway, and I loved how to bring a new definition to love-making. I always thought Inuyasha would a gentle and rather insecure lover, but I like your version better. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Infamous Monk On: August 29, 2004 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greetings fellow hentai! I think was an excellent fanfic and would like to let you know that youhave inspired me to write my own dirty little story. There were some small qualms, however, in your story such as Inuyasha's use of modern S/M terms, yet they were relatively insignificant, and I have still greatly enjoyed this story. Keep dreaming ( or wet dreaming ~_^).
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Reviewed By: Hiei81 On: August 22, 2004 00:38 CDT
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I have moments too! Normaly, my friends look at me strangly then go back to what they were doing. Their used to it. And yes i could see Inuyasha screaming "Who's your daddy!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!! OH! This was one of the best one-shots i've ever read!lmao! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"LOL Dude, can anyone else see InuYasha screaming 'WHOSE YOUR DADDY!?'" OMG! When I read that, I could TOTALLY see it! *dies laughing* In any case, this lemon was. Friggin'. Hot. I loved it a lot. First posted? It's definitely a winner. The scene was steamy and descriptive, but, most importantly, rough. I love BDSM and sub/dom fics. They're just...wow. May I just say...I love you for this.
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 01:17 CDT
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this story kicked so much ass lol i was shivering the whole time man i allmost read it twice but a had a fuckin head ach ^_^ write more(i/k) love it ^_^bethie(lunar_storm)
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Reviewed By: Nicotine patch On: August 06, 2004 07:53 CDT
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you should have made INU YASHA actually yell whos your daddy!?!?!
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Title: 10
Reviewed By: ~OMFG~ On: August 06, 2004 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude!i can see him yellin that......HAHAHAHAHA.......oh man.....my friend was like ya.....he screamed that to me last nite :D...........and i was like so?!?!he screamed that to five mintues ago......so now....were kinda not on speaking terms.....so good story!
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Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 23:58 CDT
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man that was sweet. I almost feel sorry for Hojo almost.
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 14:50 CDT
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lol! i can so see him saying that!!! great lemon. i agree with redherring, you should just write a bunch of stories like this. it was awesome!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! What a zesty lemon. That lemon had bite. Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever not logged in On: August 03, 2004 21:57 CDT
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wow....that lemon was 1,000,000,000,000% awesome!!! I know I loved it.....*stills for a moment* *starts laughing to the point of death* WHO'S YOUR DADDY!!!!!! God that was FUNNY as hell!!!
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Reviewed By: Venus1 On: August 03, 2004 14:55 CDT
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Awesome, Awesome, Awesome, and did I mention Awesome. I have read a lot of lemons and yours might be the best one to date that I have read. I also like your Inuyasha he wouldn't be all lovely dovey.
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Reviewed By: Albino Elf On: August 03, 2004 14:49 CDT
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I can't believe you think your lemons could suck. I think you lemon's are awesome because of your passion for the pairing. I love Inu/Kag and it looks like you do too and it reflects in your writing. I hope you post more stories about Inuyasha and Kagome because they are becoming a dying pairing everybody wants to be unique and write alt pairings. When they should be focusing on the true intentions of Rumiko Takahashi. I love your writing.
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Reviewed By: Inu & Kagome On: August 03, 2004 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This lemon is one of the best lemon's I have ever read. Hot & Steamy want more could a hentai fan want I must bow down to you goddess of the lemon's. Please write more Inu/Kag lemons soon.
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Reviewed By: pietrolovesaqua (ff.net) On: August 03, 2004 10:20 CDT
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*smiles hentai-like* i can really see inuyasha saying that and it's pretty damn hot
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 09:56 CDT
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actually miroku does have something on you... no wait. it's on me. this fic was great i really loved it. miroku: tell her about the thing... Sango: yeah, miroku wants to say that he got really excited by this fic miroku: *blushes*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 02, 2004 23:25 CDT
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actually i can see inuyasha saying that lol great oneshot =P
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