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Reviewed By: Abers On: May 29, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impressive. I was only going to check out the first few chapters but I couldn't stop reading. I can't wait for the next one! P.S. I hope Rei gets the girl!
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Reviewed By: NekaPrncss12(not in) On: May 26, 2005 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!I can't wait until you update soooo....HURRY UP AND DO IT!!!!!! Please?Thanks!
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Reviewed By: NekaPrncss12(not logged in) On: May 25, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!I can't wait until you update soooo....HURRY UP AND DO IT!!!!!! Please?Thanks!
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. i understand u not updateing but i want more. love it love u love love love. moree plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: kaibygirl (not logged in) On: April 23, 2005 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!! Keep on going!!! I SAID KEEP ON GOING, WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING!!!!!! ...Okay, I'm better now. I really love your fic I wanna see what happens next!!! Oh and thanks for reviewing mine, right now you are one of the most awesome people in the world!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
u evil person more *crys* I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it more plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ill go chibi on u and cry u dont eant me to cry do u??
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well its ur story. still good hope u write more i think its good. im tryin to write some of my own storys havin troble cant think of a plot.... and yes it needs a plot. im workin on it ok if i get enough ill post ok. good story anyway.
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Reviewed By: blader On: March 24, 2005 20:45 CST
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O_O its very interesting and i hope she chooses Kai because rei is kind of boring in it as in all he does is be near while kai actually reacts which makes things interesting. btw keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sakota:Please go on..... oh kai *begins to drool* I love kai...... Kai: what did you just say?....Sakota: ummm *blushes*....kai will you...Kai:*walks away* Sakota: no whate Kai!!!! oh I love this story!!!!*runs after kai*
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well i said i wasnt gonna do this but....... have tyson break up the fight between the ..... "girls" and then have his cosin change back to her normal personality and have her freek out. * smiles evily * just a thought any way its still good u havent ruined it in any way that i can see. * hugs u tightly and looks at u with her almost chibi eyes * plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz more or ill cry *whimpers* dont make me cry
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Reviewed By: zelda-13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool. i enjoy it much. plzz write more or ill go chibi on ur butt. and let me tell u, u DO NOT want that ill start to cry and then ull get all wet.* looks at u with large almost chibi eyes* i dont really have a fav yet so ....... i cant tell u what i think u should do * shrugs * u shouldnt listen to any one but u any way. plzz update soon
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Reviewed By: kaibygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 04:25 CST
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An excellent fic. What else can I say? I loved it, especially the fact that you haven't butchered everybody's personality into a million little pieces and put them back together wrongly, like a lot of people do when they're trying to write pairings fics *cough*yaoifangirls*cough*. Please update soon! --kaibygirl-- P.S.Kai is MINE!!!!!!!!!!! P.P.S. Could you review my fics too? I'm lonely...;_;
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Reviewed By: lil_bit_insane [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 18:42 CST
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I LOVE THIS FIC!!! MY FRIEND DyingSoul WAS OVER HERE READING IT TOO AND SHE LIKES IT ALOT AND SHE DOESN"T LIKE ANYBODY OR ANYTHING SO YOU"VE DONE A MIRICAL!
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Reviewed By: loveanime25 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 23:23 CST
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thats a good story. hope u can update soon. u know i like kai better tham ray well hope u can update soon.
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