| "Fragment of Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: rock n roll queen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SADLY! I was kind of wishing kagome would kill herself so she could be with inu chan....but then that ending...i was crying so bad, she waited for him! i couldnt beleive it...i read this a week ago and i still feel like crying it was sooo good. I love these types of stories and when i was done and was crying my dad walked in and said.." Ame? Are you pregnant?" lmao it was so funny but that doesnt matter it was the best damn fic i ever read! I didnt think love could be so strong between two people but you prooved me wrong! god i was crying so hard and im glad kagome didnt kill herself! I never doubted this fic once of read one boring moment!so lovely and so dramatic...i told my friends about it and even told my dad why i was crying! he laughed and said i was dumb and my boyfriend laughed at me and called me a "romantic hippie!" but he read it and i think he almost started crying too! he said it was really good! ja ne! Ame
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 13:54 CDT
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*wails uncontrollably* THAT WAS SO GOOD! OMG! I READ IT FOR ABOUT, 6 HOURS STRAIGHT! I GOT IT ALL IN ONE SHOT! *cries harder* That was so amazing!!! I'm so happy... I-I'm so sad... that was so good! They're happy! YAY!
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Reviewed By: crushed by a dandelion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 18:10 CST
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....OOOOHhhh....
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Reviewed By: P.R.D.D. aka Samantha On: September 30, 2005 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay i did it i read it 4 a 2nd time and loved it again i would have read it sooner but i um hehe i lost it any way i found and read it again yay im so happy i lub this story(alot) omg well i beter go Ja ne ill probaly review later again cuzz i will probaly read it again so ja ne i love it so much
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Reviewed By: Evangeline_Lily On: August 19, 2005 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::in a quiet voice:: I... LOVE IT. It's probably my absolute favotite story on MM.org! ::sudden pout:: but I wish you would've made an epilouge. It could've been a two paragraph epilouge but it would've been better then just the ending. Well, anyway, back to the point, great story! I plan to memorize ALL your stories and I'll check out your mermaid story! Lata! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Squirrellou!!! On: August 13, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was so awesome!!!! I cried happy tears and sad tears and i am not a person who ussually cries while reading and i read all the time!! It was just absolutly wonderful its a great story!!!
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Reviewed By: sadly i am not a member..... On: August 06, 2005 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read your entire fic. this story was so incredible, it brought tears to my eyes! it was one of those rare fan fictions that tug at your soul, and illuminate your heart. one that makes you feel something, deep within your subconcious self. something special......something.....amazing. you are truly one of the most talented people i have ever met. this fiction is my new favourite out of every one ive read on countless numbers of websites. this story is a gem, and i feel honoured to have even read it.
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Title: Tear
Reviewed By: Lateesha On: July 11, 2005 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read the whole story now. The style of writing this story i gave a 10 because u didnt try to copy some one eleses work.Spelling and Grammar were great! Creativity? Great! Havent found another story like this one yet. Enjoyment Factor? It made me cry, lol yes but its not an insult it shows how strong of a writter u r. U had emmotions behind every word. Overall Rating? Perfact... But im going to tell you something. This was good as an inuyasha story u made, BUT! It would be great if it were your own. Maybe go back and change the names of the chars make it your story that u came up with not other ppl and u just made a story out of it. If u go back and change the names to the ppl u made up. I know u could publish this as a book. And u know wut? If and hopfully when, Im gonna buy it. Your a great writter and even if it starts out as an idea for an inuyasha and kagome story, u can change it into being ur own. U could be a famous writter! A famous romance novel author. So please PLEASE! Go back make ur own names up for the chars u already have and make it ur OWN story. And please if and again hopfull when u do send me a copy so i can have ur story. Not another inuyasha and kagome story but ur own. QueenPsycotic@aol.com Im if u wish i dont care but im serious when i say u could be a great author. And if u dont want to be famous so wut still, ur choise, go back and make ur chars and make it ur own lil book.Maybe for ur children or grand children to read?Please consider GREATJOB!
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Reviewed By: Jessica b. On: June 24, 2005 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! My best friend read this story a while back and made me promise to read it. She's a huge romantic so when she said it'll make you cry i dident beleive her but when i finaly read the ending i started crying! I called her and we cried over the phone for like and hour blubbering. I blame it on hormones. Anyways i love this story! Good job!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart212 On: June 15, 2005 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. I am glad you didn't make Kagome kill herself. This story made me sad and made me laugh all at once. I hope you continue to write. ^_^
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 02:33 CDT
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I've read god knows how many of these stories. But i can count on one hand those that actually made me feel close to the point of crying that i had to take breaks just becouse i refuse to cry. I'm happy to say that your story numbers among those
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Reviewed By: DanniEllie On: March 24, 2005 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that i've honestly ever read a fanfiction so beautiful in my entire life. I read from beginning to end, I cried so much dureing the last few chapters that i'm now sporting fine dark circles and a puffy little pockets around my eyes. You my dear are the kind of writter that can honestly stop my heart... Where have you been all my life! Its presently..almost 3am, so i'm heading off to bed, but praise be that I found this fic, and I can't wait to read any thing else by you, It will deffinatly be as wonderful...and dare I say magical? Thanx for this fiction, JA
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Title: Ahaha, Math O-o
Reviewed By: Lilac ^_~ On: February 03, 2005 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Don't even SPEAK of that subject," Kagome warned, glaring at her friend with baggy, sleep-deprived eyes. "I was up all night finishing it and I HATE math. DESPISE it. LOATH it with a PASSION. Wish with every FIBER of my BEING that it would BURN FOR ETERNITY in the FLAMING PITS OF HELL." ~ Kagome o_o My thoughts exactly.... now what chapter was that on? 10 I think..... heh, no matter o_o; I just was typing to say: ~Deep exaggerated breath~ I LURVEEEE IT! 0_0 ~spazz~ o_o; Buwahaha, it so much fuunnn! ^_^ ~squeals like an insane fangirl.... which I actually am~ o_0
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_Miko On: January 17, 2005 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...I loved it. This is such a wonderful story. There should be more reviews...kinda annoys me and I didn't even write this story. Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and apprecaite(Spelling) the time you took to write it...it was beautiful, and sad, and so happy. I cried...alot. Well, anyway GREAT JOB! *Gives 2 thumbs up...If I had another thumb I'd give you 3, but I'm only human, oh well*
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