| "Broken Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 12, 2004 09:50 CDT
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I'm back! But sadly, I have to go to High School Aug. 17. Boo. Kagome found out now! I wonder how she's going to react when she sees all of those kids! And what will happen to Yuta! Please update soon! Buh-bye for now!
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Reviewed By: dT On: August 11, 2004 19:50 CDT
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WOW GOOD CHAPTER CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! ^_^ UPDATE AGAIN SOON NICELY DONE!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: August 11, 2004 19:40 CDT
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i won't say that enough... I LOVE your story! I hope you'll update as soon as you can!!
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Reviewed By: just_sombody On: August 10, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE, UDATE, I want read more, I want to read more!!!!! *puts on a serious air* Have you ever considered writing professionally?
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Reviewed By: big tall and red On: August 09, 2004 16:38 CDT
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o and is this fic based on that movie that is called what a girl wants because this is realy sounding like it so on your next up date just say yes or no at the end of next up date to tell me so you dont give it away
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Reviewed By: big tall and red On: August 09, 2004 16:34 CDT
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i saw you have 8 chapters already made well why dont you up date all at once so we dont have to kill you so please with suger on top up date fast please
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Reviewed By: big tall and red On: August 09, 2004 13:34 CDT
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this better make 5 so update before i kill ........................................................................... ................ never mind
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 20:57 CDT
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ya thats what i wanna know.. why? why did she leave inuyasha? why does he hate Kagome?
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 08, 2004 15:14 CDT
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Oh boy. I wonder what happened between those two....hope you update soon! ANd hooray! He foragave me! NOw, to comfort my half sis Kagome.
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Reviewed By: kikyo killer (too lazy to login) On: August 07, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww and I thought reviewing five time would actualy work...but hey! some one thinks I'm clever! well theres a first time for every thing...any hoo update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I realy realy want to know what happened 14 years ago!!!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 17:28 CDT
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hey I love your story! It's cool to put the mate mark elsewhere than on the neck, though I wonder why the mark is in shape of a square... ^^U oh well. Great story, I hope you'll update soon! See ya!
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Reviewed By: dT On: August 06, 2004 13:41 CDT
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wow really liked this chapter...update soonly!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: christinatails(forgot to login) On: August 06, 2004 08:01 CDT
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Ooh! I wonder what's gonna happen now while she lives there! And I wonder how Kagome's doing.....is she worried? Did she call the police? Did she find out yet? Nah! Too early for that possibility! OH, and I brought every single Ramen I dould find for InuYasha! *gives you Ramen to give to InuYasha and you fell from all of the weight* Please update soon! Buh-bye for now! *goes to my half sister Kagome*
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Title: big tall and red
Reviewed By: big red On: August 06, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it coming dam this gets better every time wow i mean just wow
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Reviewed By: Serenity2020 On: August 05, 2004 21:53 CDT
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hye loved the chapter, cant wait to see what happens , still wondering on the kag issue. Lol when i she gonna find out that her daugher is where she is , and how will she react and i gotta know what happed to make her run away in the first place.. soo meny questions , soo little answers right now . need to know pls update soon,....
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