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Title: Eyes
Reviewed By: Sirius The Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay the olny thing wrong with this is..... Ryou's Eyes are not blue.. their brown... chocolate brown!!! Oh and don't call hi Bakura call him Ryou so that way no one get confused!!!! and I love this it rules!!!!! Please update soon!!!! Heheheheheh!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sparrow666 On: August 06, 2004 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
*drooldrool* heh! what a coinkydink, eh? i think not. ^_^ update soon! also i was wondering, is this cyoa for Ryou or his yami? i was confused. not that it matters though. I wuvs them both! ^_^
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
This sounds pretty interesting! I like reading storys with Ryou in them. I am even writing a couple, well please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nite Nite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 03:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ That's right love its made in a minute it can be made for MANY MINTUES! *gets smacked on the head by Yoko Midight Dragon* HEY DONT HIT ME! YMD: Gees...tell her you enjoyed the story not talk about...*gets mouth covered by Nite* N.N: Great story can't wait for the udpate sooo update!
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