| "Sleeping with the Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 224 ] |
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Reviewed By: songiesworld (offline) On: September 29, 2004 13:32 CDT
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This story is so freaking awesome. I love that fact that ur the only person that ever wrote a fic that isn't about naraku raping Kagome. Keep writing b/c this is one of the best.
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just as good and perfect as ever! It took you a while to update though! *annoyed look* I should be bonking you on the head with a silly stick, but then you'd never update, you wierdo! Though, honestly, you can't possibly be wierder than me!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 00:46 CDT
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cools. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fabulous chapter. Of course I am so thrilled that you are continuing this fic! You are more than right, there are not enough Naraku and Kagome fics around let alone good ones. Love your work Kilala!
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Reviewed By: Dreamwalker On: September 26, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Wow...I like how this fic is hentai, but is still meaningful. Me loved it. X3 Hehehe.
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Reviewed By: yukina233 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you didn't write lemons as good as you do i would really hate you for putting kagz with naraku you scarred my friend for life.you are truly evil but thats ok cuz the lemons rok. ok i have to do my homework now...:sigh:
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Reviewed By: Abansia On: September 08, 2004 10:17 CDT
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It's been over a month now, update dammit! Your readers are wanting more, doesn't that mean something to you?
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Title: naraku
Reviewed By: dragonshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 20:00 CDT
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font color="red">Font Color hello there, this is a GREAT story, a little to rich for most, but ive red worst. this is a good story though and id love if you would continue, thanks
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Title: Sleeping with the Enemy
Reviewed By: mooniestar_69 On: August 28, 2004 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, hello, moshi-moshi! *holds up phone* Guess who it is? ME! mooniestar! I took the time to read your fanfic...and I absolutely love it to death! It's so great that there's another Naraku fan out there, cuz no one over here likes him *pouts* But I'm getting ahead of myself, I haven't even read your second chapter yet...but that's because I'm an idiot. Also, I was planning from the start to post my fic on this site, but I wasn't at *that* part yet...*nudges* you know...**that** part. *giggles insanely* I love being evil. I just wanted to see how it would survive on FF.net. But I don't think it's doing so well, only 18 reviews so far. *sigh* If only I were a better writer. But you're doing so well with this fic so far. *throws candy and confetti* keep it up and updated!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about sizzle sizzle along with a bit of mystery concerning Naraku's feelings. Hmmm, I bet it's going to just keep getting better and better!!!
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Reviewed By: Ris On: August 19, 2004 14:49 CDT
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OMG this is a great chapter i love it you have to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I don't usually read Nar/KAg, but for some reason this one kept botheirnf me and I had to read it and...whoa. Man, was that good or what? I really liked it and I can't wiat for your next updtae. Great story and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: pandaburr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowie!!!! Still as perverted as ever! (Remember, perverse is good for the soul.) Yuppie. What do I mean by perverted? You would go into a fit of giggles if someone said "That shaft is long and hard." Well, at least I do... I love your fic. Perverse should be a subject in school! I know I'd pass that and so would you! We should have a section here for 'Arousing Lemons'. Er...did I say that out loud? I think I'll go now... Hehehehe... *backs away from vomiting readers*
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Shinigami clara On: August 16, 2004 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! simply wow! i need to take a cold shower... :P wonderful ficcie! i love Naraku/Kagome pairing! (Sesshoumaru/Kagome as well.... but, hey! let's not go on to that at the moment) this fic is HOT, i can see the candles in my room melting, and it's not even lit! please please udpate soon! you don't have to be so mean and leave it HERE! you know!? that, my dear, was pure evilness, enough to rival Naraku's (not that his sadistic personality isn't good... it makes him more mysterious.... hot...mwahaha) Naraku is the best villan ever, not to mention that would also make him the best hero ever :P please please update soon! i'm looking foraward to the next chapter! please please!! i'll even buy more candles for you to melt! Looking forward to another wonderful hot lemony chapter!! ^^ ~Shinigami Clara
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Reviewed By: smileyone On: August 16, 2004 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not think such a pairing was possible and still making a great story. The story has great potential so I hope to story continues.
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