| "Something Has To Be Done" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: Yay!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!And when Kouga coms along...Kag is gonna do what INU_KAGLOVER said!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a really cute chapter! I hope to see more in the future. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:29 CST
Comment/Review:
So what is Kagome going to do when Kouga comes on to her? Walk up all seductive like, lean in REAL close, and slap that wolf silly!! Hell yeah! Plus a few WELL chosen words to add on! Awesome as usual!!
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Title: Keep Going!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!!U made us wait soooooooooo long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*Pouty face:(* Hurry....Please??!!
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Title: =D
Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a great story; i absolutely LOVE it! I hope you update soon, okay? I especially love the little converstions at the beginning of chapters that you, inu&kag have; its so funny lol well, UPDATE! i can't wait! Bye-byez!
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Title: urrgh...lol
Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMG! this is such a great fic! PLEASE update soon! I absolutely love the story! I NEED to know what happened next! Please update! For my sake! I am going to DIE because of the suspense!!! -_-;
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K, NOW I finished your story! Whew! I am totally rocking on this one 'says this with beer in one hand and the other in a mock salute'!! Anywho, this is just such an awesome story, I keep bursting out laughing so freakin' hard at some of the stuff! Wish I could write humor like you. Alas, I'm the guru of angst... Oh, well, still lovin' it, so please continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 04:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I haven't even FINISHED reading the rest of the chapters, but I HAD to stop and write a review on this! I have NEVER stopped reading in the middle of a story to review but this time I just had to. That was FREAKIN' AWESOME!! You rock! Carry on, bodacious writer, CARRY ON!!
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Reviewed By: VoidPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story ....... Must read more please update soon ^________^
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Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay you majorly improved on this chappie...there were a couple minor grammer issues but ur storey id original and keeps the reader wanting to read more so all I say to that is that your a very good writer and to keep up the great work!!!!
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Title: keep writing if not for you but your fans !!!
Reviewed By: Fox fire On: November 02, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to write more please !!!!!!!!!!!! I love how it going so far and I want to know what happens and its gonna kill me so PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE write more soon :) Thanks a bunch oh and awesome story please continue
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: HanyouBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your storey! Please keep writing! Oh and I love the fact Kagome is so rude to Kikyo now! I despise her!
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Title: Kagome-Hanyou
Reviewed By: Sha Sha On: October 25, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story alot, keep up the good work
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Title: lalalalala
Reviewed By: Daic On: September 01, 2004 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
i thought that personally your story could use some more details. also the suffix chan is used for someone younger than you, or an elementary school child. It would be more oppropriat if it were used for Rin. Also I don't get what happened to kagome, I know what went on, but you didn't use enough description for me to understand her pain. i think the story needs more umph
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Title: hikaru1617
Reviewed By: Hikaru1617 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, write more. I like!! I like!!!!
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