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Reviewed By: jewell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is interesting and would really love to found out wat happens next! Please udate
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Title: hmmms.
Reviewed By: kaye_kay28 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmms. quite interesting. . . kinda took a while to get to this point but still. my interest is rather peaked & i'm hoping you come up w/ a following chapter to this story. it's a really good start. :D looking forward to ur next update, hopefully really really really really REALLY soon? :D
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Reviewed By: Demonkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i have only one complaint but you seem to be working on it. The only thing is that you use the english names way too much. Sometimes i get confused on who is whom. But in this chapter you did much better than in the others. One other thing: please update! i really love this story. It's amazing. I've read many fics about InuYasha and Kagome forced into marriage (actually not that many) but this one is spectacular! Please update as fast as you can!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please, this story is so good and so original. i love it. dont leave me waiting in suspense, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kittyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 01:22 CST
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so nice ! the mix of present and past speech bothers me a bit but it can easily be over looked. you write the dialogue so well, and interesting. im in love with this plot, please keep it up. update sooooon! :)
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Reviewed By: PrncessS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the concept and the story, but you have an irritating habit of changing tenses and person (present tense, 1st person then past tense 3rd person, whatever) Either way, it's still a really good story and I can't wait to find out what happens, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: February 13, 2005 23:26 CST
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nice story. I like the English setting that you've made, and the inu/kag plot is so different from the other stories. can't wait till the next chapter. :]
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 13, 2005 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
omgosh this chapter was great! loved the kiss scene and his respone! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: yuyu-inuyashaluva(nsi) On: February 13, 2005 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! this story is soo good! i love the style of writing and the plot is wonderful. i cant believe you only have this much reviews! this makes me mad. you have to keep writting, i really want to see a new chapter!
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Title: Replies
Reviewed By: FaTaLfURy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 08:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey guys! How have you been? Still reading my story, eh? That's great!!! ^_^ Anyway, here's the next installment! Hope you still like it! To InuYashasLoveLorn: Thanx for reviewing! *hug* And here's the update you asked for! Drop me a line again okay? ^_^ Love ya lots! To NaomiIkahen: Hey, thanx for the review! *hug* Anyway, sorry for the cliffie, but here's the next chappy for you. And no, you're not slow. Almost everyone says that about my stories. The tenses, I mean. And I'm having a hard time fixing the way I write, but I hope you'll bear with me okay? And I do hope I'm not confusing you too much. Anyway, hope to hear from you again! Love ya lots! To mune: I liked your title! hehehe. And I'm glad you find my story to be worthwhile and deserving of your time. Thanx for reviewing! Hope you get to review again! Love ya lots!
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Title: holy s** t!
Reviewed By: muņe On: February 12, 2005 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for a story like this since like last year. I'ts really great and I hope you update really soon! I really wanna know what's going to happen next!?!?!Keep up the awesome job. Karen!
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Reviewed By: NaomiIkahen On: February 12, 2005 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was like... the WORST cliffie ever! >=/ How in the world can you leave it at that?! @.@ Alright, one crit. You seemed to switch between past and present tense a few times, and some parts utterly confused me. But I think that it was mostly because I'm slow.... =P Great job so far, keep it up ^^
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my freakin gosh!!!!......... wow you MUST! MUST! MUST! update again soon please? dont leave me wating!!!!!!!
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Title: Reviews!!!
Reviewed By: FaTaLfURy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
hey guys! it's been so long, 'ne? ^_^ sorry about that, but i've been so busy that i've forgotten to update here. hehehe. but here's to updates for you! yay!!! Love ya lots!!! to baka onna: okay, okay i'm updating! happy now? ^_^ love ya lots!!! to Kates: thanx for the comment! *hug* And here's the next 2 chappies for you. hope to hear from u again! Love ya lots!!! to LSIE: thanx for the wonderful comments! and i hope u continue reading and reviewing okay? *puppy eyes blinking* Love ya lots!!! to chaos kyes fallen angel: 1st of all, cool nickname. long, but still cool. ^_^ anyway, thanx for the glowing comments. *blussshhhyyymeeee* hope these last chappy's still got you hooked. 'till next time! Love ya lots!
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:34 CST
Comment/Review:
cool.. different, but still cool. interesting. the 3rd chapters ending is amusing. heheh.
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