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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 23:03 CDT Comment/Review: Great chappie! Yes it did clarify a lot, thank you. Anyway..can't wait for next chapter!Make fluff much fluff..or better yet...LEMON!!YAY!...sorry about that..I'll behave from now on, I swear it!(lol)Update!!!
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Title: Another Review ^^ Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 05:50 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Whoo great chappie again. Hihi quite funny Kagome started yelling and stuff ^^ and Sesshomaru being the usual icy self but not when you mention Rin! I'm sorry I don't know what else to type since I mainly allready said everything I wanted to say in a E-mail ^^" so sorry for the short review! *wiggels in her chair* wanna know what happens next >< so frustrading ... owh well bubai K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Title: HOT!HOT!HOT! Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 00:52 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This chapter was hot!!!My I need to get a cold shower(lol)Anyway, great chapter, I have to say you are doing a great work with this fic, I love it!One thing though...I'm kindda in a lost...Inu and Kag knew each other back from college?So they have been dating since then?Or they met and then he moved away from her neighborhood?Is that what she meant when she said that the goshinboku had been there when she had been heartbroken?Ok, no more questions, I'll shut up. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i love this movie!!!!! morris chesnut is fine!!! Continue the story!!!
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Title: Another Review (Your Rid Of Me Yet) Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 15:19 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Jippi you updated, you half don't know how long I've waited for the next chappie … *glares at you* your evil for it! Aawh Sesshy and Rin are back together ^^ and YAY Sess/Rin lemon! I thank you for not making Kouga an oversext bastard, most people make him this way (I'm sorry to writers who made him this way in the story) ofcourse I understand that you always need a bad guy in a stories to harasses Kagome. But after a while it becomes predictable! So cute he didn't though of himself in the lime part ^^ so cute so cute, he's so his own character this way! Not that I mind is people are a bit OOC I mean look at my story (please don't, I got enough flames already). I also wanted to compliment you on the fact that Inu Yasha saw nothing in Kikyo, most of the time it is: "He though she was hot but he knew he couldn't do it 'cause of Kagome!" in your story he doesn't do it 'cause it doesn't feel right for him! … Wouldn't it be great if guys where really like that?! :P well I'm making this review far to long again, I bet you stopped reading by now! Please update soon, I beg u! K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 00:48 CDT Comment/Review: I know the movie you talk about... Is it with Vivica Fox? Anyway the one I saw was really similar to your story(which by the way I love) and I loved it. Please update as soon as posible!Can wait for Inu and Kag to be together again!
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Title: Kawaii!! Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 12:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE your story girl! I love the way you write it all down and how everybody's character is and stuff ... and the things you tell about men are true! When they say they work late ... don't ever trust it haha! Lots of things you write down are very true, and I just love the way you put it all down. I like the crisis's with men you made up with Ayame, Rin and Sango. Very original! And the whole deal with Kagome and Inu Yasha is just great, finally some one who doesn't let Inu Yasha and Kagome have the perfect relationship, most of them are always like: They are always faithful to each other and they never even think of some one lese … okay it's cute but isn't true! So cool you made Inu Yasha confess he did wanted that girl for a second! Sesshoumaru and Miroku are also great in character. I think your doing a really great job (no I'm not being an ass kisser!) I like your story very much and I hope you update it soon! Your story is DEFINLY going in my fav. List ^^ ~ K!$$ and Love - Little Tennyo
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Reviewed By: fallen_angel13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 09:48 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this story!!!! lookin forward to the update!!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 14:31 CDT Comment/Review: Yay! Sess/Rin lemon ^__^
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Title: Good Start! Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:54 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is Forlorn Essence, author of 'Just a Note to Say'. This is a very good beginning. The independence Kagome has is wonderful. There isn't a lot of OOC so don't worry about it. You're well on your way on creating a well-known fanfic. I'm a bit of a tough critic, so a nine is a very good rating. I'll make you a promise that if you continue to review for me, I'll return the reviews^_^ Update soon!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 17:59 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I remember watching that movie. It was funny as all get out! So far so good. Keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 13:44 CDT Comment/Review: great start. I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: miroku_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 13:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: great story i hope u r continuing it
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 06:21 CDT Comment/Review: great fanfic...hope to see more chapters up soon..keep up the good work
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Title: ^_^ Reviewed By: Coca (not signed in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 20:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oo, definitely interested!! I can't wait for you to continue. ^_^ Keep going!
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