| "Insert You with Kai" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Wolf of the Darkness Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon.
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: August 13, 2004 21:24 CDT
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i love it!! but its tooo short please write more and what am i?? as in how come they know who i am?
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Reviewed By: luvergurl On: August 13, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
update plz.
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Reviewed By: a person at fat kamp On: August 11, 2004 23:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORIE PLEASE PUT UP MORE CHAPPIES!!!
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Reviewed By: candy gurl On: August 11, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good.
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Reviewed By: Blazerwolf3431 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 16:16 CDT
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This is a really good story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chaos Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah! Great story! I'm famous in here! Yahh!
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Reviewed By: weird0 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 11:03 CDT
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Well, not much happened there, but I think the next chapters will be more interesting. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: here walks in death On: August 09, 2004 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be as Sincere with you. Theres no discription at all.For example when you mentioned that you went inside the building and such and then you call a limo you act as is youve been outside all the time. in other words its confusing to really follow. I think overall rating should be 3 or something.
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 19:25 CDT
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cool i like it!!! can't wait for the rest ^__^
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Reviewed By: ldy leo On: August 09, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter.
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Title: COOL!!
Reviewed By: The soul less pilot of Eternity [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey this is cool but ..........KASEY E-MAIL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!I' bored and I want to ask you some things
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Title: KAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANOTHER KAI CYOA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUV LUV LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! JA NE!!!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
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Reviewed By: Neptune_Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoo-hoo! I *love* Kai self-inserts. Added to my favourites, please update soon!
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