| "Dressing the part" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hi! On: September 30, 2004 17:40 CDT
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WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING!!!!! DO NOT MAKE ME COME THROUGH THIS COMPUTER SCREEN TO STRANGLE YOU!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 21:16 CDT
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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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Reviewed By: puppy ears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is great pleasee update asap!! iknow that it can get a little annoying, even if your good at getting criticism, to encompas all the negative things people can say, but i don't hav anything unpleasent to say! i loved it and understood it and it was great i read it all last night and got yelled at cause i wouldn't get offline! but it was sooo worth it keep up the good work!! ja p e
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Reviewed By: spumante [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 21:30 CDT
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i really like this story, i cant wait to find out what inu thinks about kagome and im wondering if he has managed to put two and two together and figure out that kag is miko. anyway update soon please
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Reviewed By: sakuraforce2whoistoolazytosignin On: September 21, 2004 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: September 21, 2004 17:16 CDT
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[squees] that was SOOOO unexpected! please update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: shriylon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 21:57 CDT
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YES!!! FINALLY, thank GOD!! I was about to burst wanting all of them to know!! ahem. anyway, excellent chapter, I loved it, alothough it was vaguely reminiscent of mulan. I liked, though. YAYNESS!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sakuraforce2whoistoolazytosignin On: September 15, 2004 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look, this is going to come off very harsh, but it needs to be done. Your first scene in this chapter isn't explained well or at all, and frankly the entire thing felt very random and hastily thrown together. The scenes didn't carry any logic to them, possibly because I didn't understand the first scene, and then you had no details about pregame preparation, which school it's being held at, none of those details or odd little traditions like Kagome's shaved legs that help to pull together and solidify this game. I really think this chapter needs to be redone. If anything I've said offends you, or you think I'm being mean, my email address is sakuraforce2@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 16:56 CDT
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[giggling insanely] God...Miroku... [giggles] at least he's TRYING, right? keep up the good work and update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: sadaboxter83 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 03:36 CDT
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awsome story i always seem to be online when you update.... thank god i have you in my favorites...keep up your fantastic work..
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: September 14, 2004 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was so funny with the whole kissing sceen for some reason but keep writing this is getting better and better by the chapter so keep going and updating thanks
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 20:45 CDT
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I've been following this fic since you started it but this last chapter was really off. The 'Mushin' thing just came out of no where and didn't make much sense. I've liked the fic so far, but I have to tell you that I did not like this last chapter. I hope you get back on track and update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Sango_windwarrior On: September 12, 2004 16:15 CDT
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Wow! I love this! I love things that are bitter-sweet, like this.
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: September 12, 2004 11:25 CDT
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hmmm...that was definately not what i had expected... @__@ i like how you wrote it out though. but mayabe it would have been a little bit better hif there had been a bit more detail. --Netiri
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Reviewed By: nylsor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:12 CDT
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this is great. please update. i can't wait to see how this turns out.
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