| "Dressing the part" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 20:45 CDT
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I've been following this fic since you started it but this last chapter was really off. The 'Mushin' thing just came out of no where and didn't make much sense. I've liked the fic so far, but I have to tell you that I did not like this last chapter. I hope you get back on track and update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Sango_windwarrior On: September 12, 2004 16:15 CDT
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Wow! I love this! I love things that are bitter-sweet, like this.
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: September 12, 2004 11:25 CDT
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hmmm...that was definately not what i had expected... @__@ i like how you wrote it out though. but mayabe it would have been a little bit better hif there had been a bit more detail. --Netiri
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Reviewed By: nylsor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 20:12 CDT
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this is great. please update. i can't wait to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: September 10, 2004 21:53 CDT
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[squees like an idiot] i can't wait to see how THIS works out! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri (not logged in) On: September 06, 2004 09:08 CDT
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[grins] i definately didn't see the Sesshomaru thing coming but i think its a good twist. ^^ please update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: brittney On: September 03, 2004 21:01 CDT
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i love thsistory im waiting for you next xhapter patiently cuz school is a major pain, my stories are also on hold to. thanks to all the high school classes im taking for 8th grade. so no hurry. ^.^
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Reviewed By: shriylon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 16:01 CDT
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gah! why must you make everyone so stupid?!! and confuse me so much!! it's really very frusterating that everyone in this story is in love with each other and doesn't know it. I want to kill kikyo and smack the rest of them upside the head. maybe the stars will tell them what's going on? I dunno...I'm leaving now. zaijin~ ps - take that as a compliment, not a complaint! this is good plotting!
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Reviewed By: vivian On: September 03, 2004 15:35 CDT
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update!!!!!!!!!!! oh my god!!!!!!!!!! the story is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you better update or else!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i swear to god i'll hunt you down like a dog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: hanamaru285 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 04:24 CDT
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KEWL STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. pleassse continue sooon
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Reviewed By: mybyrdy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he he he... twisting and turning, youve done a great job so far, and we're all looking forward to see where you're goin. pace yourself- dont try to rush or add more or lengthen chapters if you dont wanna. dont let the likes of us intimadate you; oh and p.s... if you decide you wanna throw a little citrus in and dont wanna be responsible, there are plenty of us out here that can put in our 2 cents. you know the saying, "if i had a penny for every hentai who offered help, you'd be rollin in dough!" but seriously, you're doing a wonderful job; cant wait till your next update.
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Reviewed By: fatalfeline On: August 26, 2004 19:51 CDT
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omg! wats kagome gonna do now? i love thi this! lmfaos!
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Reviewed By: mizukashii On: August 26, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no! what is going to happen to kagome and sango? the people who walked in, are they Inuyasha, and miroku? I can't wait until I get to read the next chapter. miz
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 16:02 CDT
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ooooooo~! i can't wait to see who caught her! update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, now there is a good little brother, Souta should get a huge hug *hugs*, why can't my brother be as intelligent and sweet as him? Oh well. You know, you discribe baseball or softball... whatever, you know what I mean, so well! I can't get that detailed with sports cause I dont' really like them, but you did very well kudos to you! Nice chapter over all, can't wait for the next one! -Kinoko
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