| "Red Riding Haori" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mido-chan On: September 09, 2004 11:19 CDT
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Baby, you're cheating. You can't be an ass wacking artist, AND, now I find, one wicked fanfic writer too. You know, shucks, i can write, but hell i can't write a lemon at all, and you wrote a class A here. ^^ Say what- It also had plot-- a great great asset. AND really good grammer. This fic is really yummi, let me say.----Midoriko-sama
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 14:13 CDT
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The ending is a little short, especially the follow-up with Kaede. Still, I do approve of not telling us what happens with Sesshoumaru; that bit of uncertainty just keeps things interesting.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 13:43 CDT
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The relationship between Inuyasha, the forest and the village is well-thought-out, and the characterization is yummy. This 'fic gets the Ithilwen seal of joyous not-badness.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 14:59 CDT
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That's not supposed to be an end you know. I do hope you were only joking when you said that was the end. This story was really good, for a Red Ridding Hood knock-off, most of them suck real bad, and I mean really they suck. This one however was different, and good, and hopefully no longer in the past tense, hopefully, you'll continue, erm... please?
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: August 28, 2004 13:13 CDT
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Wonderful! Although I'm sad that it is already over. You did an amazing job on this story, especially considering the fact that it is your first fanfiction. Surely you've been doing some writing outside of fanfiction to have already honed your skills that much. ^_^ Anyway, I certianly wouldn't be against you continuing this story, but I'll also be very interested to see what other kinds of stories you'll be able to come up with. I'll be looking forward to seeing some new material from you soon!
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 00:47 CDT
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I liked it. :-D
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:40 CDT
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It was very well written for a first fanfiction. I suppose you've had practice outside of fanfic writing? I do hope to see a continuation fic, but am also interested in seeing your other ideas. Good luck with other stories! I'll look out for them! ^____^
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: August 27, 2004 15:44 CDT
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I like this story and I hate to see it end! But thanks for sharing it with us and I'll look for your other stories. Take care. --wj
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 12:38 CDT
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I think was a very very good for a first fanfiction. Though it is opened to continuation if you do not feel like it should be continued that is fine because I've seen too many good fanfics get ruined by a very poorly written second part. It might be just me but the authors seem to fall into traps and easy ways out in the second part of a story and though it might not always happen the chance is there. But that is just my opinion and you can throw it to the wind if you want. Regardless this was very good and I am very impressed that this is a first fanfic. Nicely done.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 20:17 CDT
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Well, darn! I got all excited because I thought you updated it but it looks like you only fiddled with the older chapters. I guess I'll have to be patient a little longer. I like your story and I hope to see the next chapter soon. Please update! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 15:06 CDT
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Inuyasha forgot them! Hah! How amuzing, anyway, I want you to continue and I love this story, and Kagome shouldn't be mad at Inuyasha he didn't know, and it was really more of Kagome's fault than Inuyasha's anyway because she knew what she had done was wrong and Inuyasha didn't and the word and is getting on my nerves about now, as I'm sure it is yours. Therebeing I'll shut up. Please continue soon, Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: JessC On: August 22, 2004 01:16 CDT
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Is that it? Is there more.. I need more you know...lol.. good chapter but seriously i hope there is more!
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Title: I just noticed!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Loved the story....I just noticed your Author name! It rocks! I luv Sublime ALOT!!! Ska comes natural to me that and rock!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon On: August 20, 2004 21:28 CDT
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You updated! And of course, I didn't find chapters three or four until just now. I really need to keep a better check on this story...anyway, great job! You had me on the edge of my seat, especially during chapter three leading up to the point where Inyasha arrived. It was very well written and I enjoyed reading both chapters. Hopefully everything will work out well in the end for pair, and that you'll update soon and put all of us poor readers out of our misery!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 20:38 CDT
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Hahaha, I think Inuyasha did forget them. Well maybe just Kaede since he did remember Shippo, just not where they were. Good chapter. Can't wait to see this talk they have, maybe Kagome and Inuyasha will work this out.
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