| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 29, 2004 09:17 PDT
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Sooooo... No way is Sango going to give up on hunting Naraku. Somehow I really don't see Fluffy taking that very well.
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Title: Breath taking
Reviewed By: Kikilala On: October 24, 2004 21:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work was unbelievable, this chapter was Breath Taking. You had only two grammatical errors but who am I to judge, I'm horrible at fixing my own story, not that they even matter. I got the meanings, and I felt their passion in my heart that'swhen you know you've reached. Peace.
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Reviewed By: Marlingrl On: October 23, 2004 21:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fanfic is amazing! I stumbled across it thinking it was something different and I'm just blown away by the story and how you've presented the characters. I especially found it interesting that you put Sango with Sesshoumaru. She's usually presented as the more "traditional" of the two girls and as such, more more straightlaced. I like what you've done in having her submit as part of her honor for Sesshoumaru saving Kohaku. I hope you get to update again soon. I'm very curious as to what's going to happen
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: October 22, 2004 20:04 PDT
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hey great story! just out of curiousity, what did you mean when sessy said that he decided to sire a hanyou child? is it what i think it means? you've got to update agian soon! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! your's truly, morwen re
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 22, 2004 12:58 PDT
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Small suggestion for a miniature plot bunny that wouldn't leave. Now that everyone has gotten over being tired, our intrepid shard hunters are going to need to do some training, particularly Sango and Kohaku (to maintain peak fitness, like for a dancer or compelting martial artist, you have to work out almost every day.) Sango needs to do some sparring, Inu is the logical choice for her partner, and I would just love to see his brother's reaction to that. We kow that Inuyasha trains with Kirara,and that Kohaku used to. Sango must spend time practicing her craft besides using it on demon hunts. The castle Youkai probably have training grounds used by all. Can we see Sango kick a little ass? Pleeeese? It would make my feminist heart so happy.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really have enjoyed every thing that i have read of yours so far. theirs only one thing i have noticed here on media miner that could use to be improved. when a person reads your stories chronologily they would get confused since you don't have the first story, Daimyo Inutashio, here on media miner. that is the only thing i think could be improved and it wouldn't take that much work at all. allso to recap your fics are great.
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Title: Greatness = this story
Reviewed By: inuluva_anon180206 On: October 21, 2004 21:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. Extremely tasteful imagery. Keep it up. Looking forward to more written like this one.
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Reviewed By: firehairedpixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 15:34 PDT
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aawww!!! :-) And my my my, did you make Jano a hentai!! :-) Not that that is a bad thing... Yay for updating!! I loved the fighting before the loving, that is so like them. The great BakaYasha strikes again. :-) Personally if I was Kagome, I would have kissed Jano, just to see what it would be like. But then again, I'm a hentai. :-D
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Title: first time
Reviewed By: OhJoy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my... that was awesome! The first time is never all roses and sweetness, huh? I love the reality you brought into your story of how things go! Bed, who needs a bed? Rock on!
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: October 21, 2004 05:39 PDT
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Awww. You know, I think that if the two of then ever did get together, there would have to be a pratfalls. No way they'd manage everything smoothly the first time. That was really nice. Odd how Sesshomaru's cousins are all managing to paly matchmaker for Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: October 17, 2004 22:04 PDT
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great fic! you gota update again soon, please! i want to know what happens between inu and kag, as well as if sango and sess talk about the whole mating thing. oh, and japanese castles do have bath tubs. they're huge. just thought you might like to know that. ja ne for now.
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Title: Hey hey hey lol
Reviewed By: kikilala On: October 17, 2004 15:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is a perfect ten, OMG I am so sorry that I didn't review before but I will now. Your story is what I sign on line for nowadays, it's awesome. It's really orignal and I'm addicted. I love the way it's working out, and hint please have some Kagome and Inuyasha action, I'm thinking that you will but I just wanna put it out as a suggestion if you weren't. The fact that it just flows with a plot and has a point not just Sess and Sango getting togeather it's great. ^-^
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Title: IT'S GETTING HOT IN HERE!! ^_^
Reviewed By: myst_lady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah... Luscious Lemon. ::drools:: Damn, don't think of it as a pervert. Whoa. I'm on fire baby... This is gotta be the best original alternate pairing I've read in my life. Sesshomaru's character was probably toughest one to do. I congratulate you on this well done story!
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Title: IT
Reviewed By: myst_lady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 19:58 PDT
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf On: October 16, 2004 14:08 PDT
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great fic cant wait for you to update! how are the demon girls going to get back at Miroku?
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