| "The Youkai and the Exterminator" Reviews/Comments [ 221 ] |
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Title: ch49
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 20:52 PST
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Oooh the plot thickens! I thought it would have been their crazy grandfather... but this is very cool too! A very exciting chapter!
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Title: Of trains and cliffies
Reviewed By: Aurora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 14:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang...I saw it coming but...dang...It was like standing on railroad tracks and watching as the train came around the bend, you expect it but when it hits you... That's an evil cliffhanger by the by.;D
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: AWESOME On: February 24, 2006 13:54 PST
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Damn! it has been a LOOONG time! i didnt think you were still alive out there! anyways awesome chappie and please update some more. i cant wait to see who said that last sentence> UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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Title: ???
Reviewed By: momomimi On: February 24, 2006 08:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wha- huh- bu-...long, long time I thought undead evil be Sess and Inu's no name granddaddy. you do that on purpose or is I not reading right? only monster demon side of Inutaisho awake now...... hmmm...me hope Sango baby be girl if it get through with its life. me been hearing rumors. you best writer ever, Wheezi! I dying for next chapter!
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Title: Crap!
Reviewed By: Aurora [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After all that, you leave me hanging like this? I've not been able to stop reading this fic since I started and now I haveto wait for an update, it's unfair. Oh well I guess I'll have to be patient and let the story weaver continue her yarn.
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Reviewed By: Qem [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 18:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I had to go back and re-read a few chapters to get back into this and have an idea of whats going on. I'm absolutely stunned by the latest revelations in this chapter, that Naota was inlove with Inuyasha's mother. Me thinks the hanyou boy would not be too impressed. You've managed to write a really magical exciting story thats capable of keeping people hooked as they jump from chapter to chapter. Its a really fascinating read, so ultimately all I can say is thankyou for writting it!
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Title: meh?
Reviewed By: e.j. On: February 03, 2006 17:55 PST
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did naota rape!?! Izayoi? God, thats disturbing! And is the monster Inu-chan's father? Cause thats disturbing again. Okay, lots of things here are disturbing. Thanks for corrupting my mine. Lol Good story...but please update within a week!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 48
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: December 10, 2005 22:29 PST
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Whoa! Naota...and Izayoi! What a shocker. How will InuYasha handle that? More twists and turns. I love it!
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Title: I'm hooked!
Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 10:28 PST
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Okay I was hooked by the first chapter. But now that I've read all that you have to offer so far I can truly say how much I am enjoying this fic! It's super long but you have not failed to keep me riveted at every turn. Your original characters are rich and super interesting, your characterizations of both orignal and established chars are awesome and you have such amazing insight into their personalities. You have literally sucked me right into the story and have me in your grip! I am puzzled by the myth of the "impure" miko losing her powers as she loses her virginity as it doesn't happen for monks - they are still capable of strong spiritual powers without having their virginity intact. Maybe Kagome won't be able to sense the shards anymore but she should at least be able to purify. I really don't see how it could make too much of a difference (I know she used her powers on the monster but I just wanted to say that). It seems to be a bit biased in favour of the males, doesn't it? Now you had me with that SessKag you wrote (it was awesome), but I will be reading more for sure. And I do illustrations of stories that I love, so you might be seeing some at some point in the future! ^_~
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Title: UPDATE PLEASE!!!
Reviewed By: whit On: November 22, 2005 06:37 PST
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this is such a good story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! as usual overall rating: 1o
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 15:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whaaa? you are freakin' me out throwing that part about naota's betrayal in there. i would have never imagined that he had done that. that's good!... er bad. well, good plot, bad naota. why izayoi? i mean, did he have a death wish? i wonder if inu will still want his help, or if he'll just f*ck his sh*t up instead!? ^__^ don't worry 'bout taking too long to update. as long as you do at some point, i'll be juuust fine. ; ) go get it miroku! you dog, you. ha ha. ummm. yeah.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 12:07 PDT
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Hmm...what a trio for the hunt; InuYasha, Kouga and Sesshoumaru. I think I'd pay to see that. And, considering that thier females are the ones that are in danger, nobody better get in their way...not even each other. Kouga no Baka, he should stop baiting dog-boy and just stick to the trail. They shouldn't be fighting when they have the same goal; Save Kagome and Sango. It's a good thing that Sesshoumaru has shown up because his cooler head should make an excellent buffer between the two volitile canines. LOL -- Back at the fortress...Makiko sure seems to be taking Jano's condition rather well. Heh...she'll probably save it for when he's better, then chew him out for being careless. And Miroku, *chuckle* is going to be a daddy. Well, he's been asking for that since the beginning...but I'll bet he never thought that his offspring would need chew-toys! (HA HA HA! Sorry, couldn't help myself) He sure asked for it. Maybe he's ready for round 2? --- Woof!
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Reviewed By: Hiei and the Cherry On: September 20, 2005 19:47 PDT
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Awesome! This story just keeps getting better and better and more intertwined! You should change the names and copyright material and make yourself a book. You realize you've written well over 200 pages? And it's all friggin awesome and keeps people reading! ~_^ Been with ya since the beginning and will be till the end! TY!
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Title: MORE UPDATES
Reviewed By: whit On: September 19, 2005 21:42 PDT
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yes yes yes oh god thank you for updating this. good chappie and keep them coming!
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Title: Ch 47
Reviewed By: toolazytologin On: September 18, 2005 06:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, keep them coming!
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