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Title: A place for my head
Reviewed By: Annie mea On: March 15, 2005 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its such a great fic you did a great job the storyline is interesting and the way yoh wants to protect anna and get revenge on hao to what he did toher is soooooooo sweet it shows how yoh loves anna nd how she trusts yoh like no other that she feels safe in his arms some of the spelling grammar is wrong but that really doesnt affect the story I hope you can write more on this story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: crazydontcoverit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so awesome, i luved that u had yoh show a dark side and anna actually helpless for once!! please update very soon!
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Title: More, Please?
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best ways to portray Anna and Yoh. I like the fact that Yoh's protective of Anna and wants to kick butt! So... are you gonna let him? Are u gonna finish this story? Please say that you will!
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Title: This is a nice story!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what you have done. Really, just how dark are you going to allow Yoh to go? Please write more.
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Reviewed By: Kunx1127 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
*now :)
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Title: very excellent
Reviewed By: Kunx1127 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE REVIEW SOON!!! Excellent story and not you have your 10th review :)
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Reviewed By: mona On: September 18, 2004 06:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Awsome second Chapter! I really enjoyed your update!!! Please update soon, I've gotta find out what happens next. Bye, Lella ^_~
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Reviewed By: MaskOfMe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome continue please definatly going on favorites
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Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: August 28, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome continue please definatly going on favorites
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Reviewed By: mona On: August 22, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know why people haven't read this yet its a good story and a good first chapter and i hope to read some more in the near future...just saying please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh cliffie!!! Please update soon. This seems like a good idea. Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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Reviewed By: Ixotiq [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
update please!! i really want to find out what happens, too.
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: Lella ^_^ On: August 11, 2004 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, Yes!,you should continue this fict,Plz! This one was not usually the type of ficts I read but this one makes you want to read it. And I have to find out what happens! Bye
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Reviewed By: Mitakei On: August 11, 2004 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the beginning! Please update soon, I'm really anticipating Yoh and Amidamaru's reactions.
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