| "What You Wouldn't Think" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jenna2 On: August 09, 2005 02:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovin this story!!! I always did like the '3 year gap' BV stories though. I really enloyed the plot and the way Vegeta develops and changes without being too out of character. You're a very good author. Can't wait for an update! ^_^
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Title: WoW!
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 22:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! First of all, I'd like to tell you that I began to read your story about two days ago and I just can't stop reading it! When I read it, I can really see pictures of the story in my head and that's something that doesn't happen to me very often. Your story is really great and is really near if not exactly what Vegeta and Bulma would feel. And I can't wait to read the next chapters so please update soon! And I can tell you that I will come here and check every single day to see if you updated it! So please, hurry up!! (Excuse me if my english is not really good but I've tried as best as I could! ^^ ) It's really great so keep writting! [_DarkSaiyan_]
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Reviewed By: Believah On: August 04, 2005 04:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it... V/B pairing are awesome... and you got their personality just right... update soon.
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Title: -claps-
Reviewed By: randomdbzfan On: June 14, 2005 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cute... now more?
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Title: How cute?
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 22:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
That's aweasome. Vegeta's so happy to be a daddy!
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Title: TKQD-CH4
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe yamucha sold out his home plant so thet vegeta getts killed and yamcha will get bulma..update soon.
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Reviewed By: trace On: March 25, 2005 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job. i loove it. but update new ch's more often. i wonder what happens after.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a couple of these outer space ones and this one seems like its in its own class. I like the relationship take. Very cute. Keep writiing.
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Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know 7 days late, A late review is better then no review..THe place will be up in arms when word gets out the the queen was pushed down the stairs...up dae soon........ St. Patrick's Day & Happy Easter.. I was your beta reader. You must have forgoting about me, That's ok I'm used to it by now....... Denise
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Title: What You Wouldn't Think"
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 23:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP-DATE SOON...
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Reviewed By: RedSirena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 12:36 EST
Comment/Review:
ohhh please update soon
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Title: I slight problem...
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 22:14 EST
Comment/Review:
I was reading the above story and I noticed that the new chapters don't really match up with the Bulma/Vegeta story. I checked out your other story featuring Videl/Gohan and found that the same chapters were posted there as well. Also I can't find the first story of your series with ChiChi/Goku. Just thought I'd give you a heads up!
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Reviewed By: Littleme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol I love it. Please write more. Vegeta calling the pizza place was ... hilarious! :D
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 12, 2004 22:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
Glad to see it's back up again.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: August 12, 2004 18:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked this story! It was sweet and it kept the angst and 'friendship' between B/V on track. I could see her opinion shifting as she began seeing who he truly is-Good job-
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