| "What You Wouldn't Think" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Believah On: August 04, 2005 04:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it... V/B pairing are awesome... and you got their personality just right... update soon.
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Title: -claps-
Reviewed By: randomdbzfan On: June 14, 2005 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cute... now more?
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Title: How cute?
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 22:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
That's aweasome. Vegeta's so happy to be a daddy!
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Title: TKQD-CH4
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe yamucha sold out his home plant so thet vegeta getts killed and yamcha will get bulma..update soon.
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Reviewed By: trace On: March 25, 2005 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice job. i loove it. but update new ch's more often. i wonder what happens after.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a couple of these outer space ones and this one seems like its in its own class. I like the relationship take. Very cute. Keep writiing.
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Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know 7 days late, A late review is better then no review..THe place will be up in arms when word gets out the the queen was pushed down the stairs...up dae soon........ St. Patrick's Day & Happy Easter.. I was your beta reader. You must have forgoting about me, That's ok I'm used to it by now....... Denise
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Title: What You Wouldn't Think"
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 23:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP-DATE SOON...
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Reviewed By: RedSirena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 12:36 EST
Comment/Review:
ohhh please update soon
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Title: I slight problem...
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 22:14 EST
Comment/Review:
I was reading the above story and I noticed that the new chapters don't really match up with the Bulma/Vegeta story. I checked out your other story featuring Videl/Gohan and found that the same chapters were posted there as well. Also I can't find the first story of your series with ChiChi/Goku. Just thought I'd give you a heads up!
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Reviewed By: Littleme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol I love it. Please write more. Vegeta calling the pizza place was ... hilarious! :D
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 12, 2004 22:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
Glad to see it's back up again.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: August 12, 2004 18:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked this story! It was sweet and it kept the angst and 'friendship' between B/V on track. I could see her opinion shifting as she began seeing who he truly is-Good job-
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