| "All Things Come Full Circle" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Patriot On: January 10, 2005 05:15 CST
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Excellent chapter 7, I loved it. Hmm, interesting pairing you're starting to suggest here, sounds like it could really work too.
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Reviewed By: dw On: January 10, 2005 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it hope to see an update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: karla On: January 09, 2005 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS!!!! thank you for redeeming my kouga-kun!!! awwwwww the thought of him and inu-kigo together is so kawaii!!!! can't wait for your next chappy! i gotta run, dad is yelling for me to get off the computer!!! (you were right, that was long....) ja ne! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just happened upon this fic and am really enjoying it. Of corse I read the other first adn it was good as well. I can't wait for the update. I hope it comes soon.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 02:14 CST
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Very good chapter. Stupid Kouga. I liked your scene with Inuyasha and Kagome at the end of this chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: karla On: December 10, 2004 08:04 CST
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O.o........I had a few things in mind to comment about earlier in the chapter but after that "finish" words elude me....WHOA! I knew it was going to be on the "lemony" side but WHOA! I didn't expect that! LoL! I can honestly say this though...you have way more guts than me! But seriuosly here...that scene was very well put together, not just some mindless fooling around. There so many authors out there that just write two sentences and then have thost two jump in the sack together. Ha..and you were right! THAT was a L-O-N-G one! Oh how I wish I had that ability.....to just keep writing and writing and not lose focus. You make my 1500 word chapters look like appitizers..LoL..! Good work as always...very impressed! Ja ne Jen! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 On: December 06, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,i usually dont review since my computer is really sentintive and gets viriuses very easily but i had to do it for your fic.It's very well written and i have no complaints.You are an excellent writer and dont ever stop writing! Ive really been enjoying your story it brightens my day when i learn that you have updated a chapter.So please update soon,cause i cant wait to see what happens! ^ ^ Please update soon ,and remebr your an excellent writer nd dont ever stop writing!E-mail if you can please!My e-mail- Kagome0820@aol.com ^_^ e-mail me soon when you are going to update or just to talk! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: Az On: November 25, 2004 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your fic, this fic is really good so update as soon as possible.!!!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no evil cliffy! That's worst then the one I left in my story. Please, please, please update soon, I am really enjoying this story. I came across it last night, and stayed up half the night reading the first one. I had to start the second one right away. Please update soon! Things are getting good.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 02:40 CST
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I just discovered this story. I was very confused and did not understand where Inuyasha's sister came from or what was going on and I almost stopped reading it after two paragraghs in chapter one because it made no sense to me. Your story is good, but you need to add a Prologue explaining where InuKigo came from or insert an Author's Note that states that this story is a sequel to your other story and the other story needs to be read first or, better yet, include a statement in the summary telling readers to read your other story first or this one won't make any sense. I had to figure out for myself why your first chapter just started in the middle of a story that did not make any sense by going to your bio and finding your other story for myself. Most readers won't have that much patience and they will just stop reading it if it is confusing (which it is), so you need to tell them up front that this story starts off where your other story stopped. This is not a flame. Your story is good and I like it so far, but you need to introduce it in a way that makes it independent of your other story or include a statement at the beginning of your first chapter telling readers to go to your other story first, or include a Prologue explaining where your story begins and where Inukigo came from. I hope you update soon, but I also hope you clarify the beginning of this story somehow so that it is not so confusing. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: karla On: October 19, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is getting repetitive isn't it? LOL well I guess this review makes it 4/5! Good chappie as usual...loved the "nudist phase" keep up the good work! ja ne!(^_^)
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Reviewed By: beaudtiful-cherry-blossom On: August 30, 2004 22:50 CDT
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WOW! so happy u updated! that chappy ROCKED! realy picked up there as far as enjoyment factor goes...really fun and interesting! and chalk-full of suspense! keep going! ja ne, karla
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Reviewed By: § On: August 22, 2004 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!! like the last one, hope you keep going
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: karla On: August 20, 2004 22:47 CDT
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good chappy,as always. can't wait for more! ja ne, beautiful-cherry-blossom
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Reviewed By: beautiful-cherry-blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fan fic!! but i already told u that...lol! just thought i'd review....i know i love em! later girl! karla
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