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Title: Frailty
Reviewed By: Rogue Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic. I love Frailty and have before written you an email in which I congradulated you on it. When I have time I plan to read your new TT fic, as requested and am certan that I'll enjoy it. You have a great style of writing which is clear and eloquent and fun to read. Great plot and I love how you're able to make it dark without being overly angsty. Great work and I look forward to reading more of it.
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Reviewed By: Helloweena On: August 07, 2005 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It has kept me on the edge of my set in many places. It's a very fun read and the grammar is very good. I check about every two weeks for the next part. I hope you keep up the good work. I feel people can truely enjoy this one.
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Reviewed By: Jamer The Titan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My man, This was some kickass fic. I love the suffering, its one of my favourite games, and I think you really caught the creepy environment of Carnate Island, and Abbot prison....You were also very clever when you described the monsters as the Slayers, and the Marksmens, very cool. And its even better that you combined it with Raven. Keep the good work. "I see my reflection in my own pool of blood" RT: Ramsey Truman (Quote from the Suffering) Ps: I'm writing a story too, it's called The Sounds Of the Souls, if you want would you tell me what you think of it?
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Title: Oh yeah!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 23:48 CST
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Ha! Longest review yet! Go Raven, Go Raven, it's your birthday! Shake yo booty! Yeah!!!
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Title: B. R. Utal!!!
Reviewed By: Saint Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite my use of an old Edge and Christian reference in the review title, I must say that this is one of the best fics I've ever read. Then again, I'm usually looking for Raven fics that involve her and Jinx falling in love, so I'm not one to really talk (granted, I've yet to find any that are Raven/Jinx...let me know if you know of any, seriously!) I have been sucked into this fanfic! I think that it's an incredible story, great plot and development, freaky, and, if the actual Suffereing had been this good, it might have been more than a Silent Hill take-off, in my opinion at least. Please update soon! If you don't updat in about a week or so, I'll email this review to you personally so you know that you have at least one big fan left. Rock on dude!
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Reviewed By: EPM(Too lazy to sign in) On: December 01, 2004 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For writing a 'Suffering' fic alone I think you're great but adding Raven was even better. Your descriptions of the prison are fantastic and the action original and entertaining. Raven is really in character which I imagine must be hard to write when she's in such a situation. Poor Raven's gotton quite banged up already and she isn't halfway through! Please continue!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Moon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Thanks a lot,I'd want to apologize to all the members of Media Miner,well I'll make a story is called the Moon Princess,well,wait and you'll see!! P.S:Pleze tell everyone in MediaMiner that Im sorry,I'll forgive everyone!
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Reviewed By: Zokoma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 00:29 CDT
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just caught up with your chapters, looks like i've missed out on quite a lot. Hmmm more suspence every chapter. keep up the nice work.
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Title: Oh, damn
Reviewed By: OzZ Cometh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 17:28 CDT
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I appreciate the review, and in response to your question provided this answer, I wasn't totally sure how to fluidly add a scene that consisted of her re-loading the gun, so I didn't add it at all. In retrospect, you've caught me on a technicality as I really don't have much off-hand knowledge on guns. I did however, say that it was a double-barrled. -JackoMegane
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Title: nice fic
Reviewed By: mr m16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 05:31 CDT
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this is a really well written fic but as an avid shooter and gun owner i am currious as to how raven was able to fire more than 2 shots from a double barrel shotgun without taking the time to reload? now if it were a pump shot gun preferably the m3 benelli or the remington 870 with an extended feed tube then it would have made more sense since you can load 8 in the gun. and she fired 9+ rounds. but that would more than anything be my only complaint.
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Title: 'nother good one
Reviewed By: zokoma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 19:27 CDT
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That was definitely another great chapter. You put suspense within each chapter, especially with the other guards, nice work. Keep it up.
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Title: Alright ^^
Reviewed By: Nei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 10:03 CDT
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Oh... this is a very nice fic. You've done an excellent job catching the dark atmosphere of the prison in The Suffering as well as capturing the personlities of Raven and Hermes. I wish I could write this well ^^; plus having 3 chapters posted in a matter of 2 days is an excellent show of dedication. Keep it up!
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Title: zokoma
Reviewed By: Zokoma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 02:41 CDT
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Another great chapter. You really have the eeri and creepy feelings down. As i read i really see a picture, i'm not sure if it's the picture you're trying to paint, but there's a really clear picture of what's going on. Love your writing, it makes the story so much easier to read. As i'm sure you know sometimes bad writing takes a good piece down. Well keep it up, can't wait for another chapter, this is good stuff.
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Reviewed By: zokoma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 02:20 CDT
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really liking this story, keep it up.
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Title: wow-o
Reviewed By: publicart On: August 14, 2004 01:40 CDT
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well i'm no good at ratings, but i must say i'm liking your story (i've only read 1 chapter so far). When i was reading the summary it didn't really compel me to read it, but once i got started i couldn't stop. i've never heard of the suffering, so i don't have much to say on the topic of the crossover. but i do enjoy your story, i like your style, the writing is superb. Keep it up, i hope to read more.
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