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| "Insomniac" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: OMG!!! SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIKKKKKKKKEEEEEE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spike's song! Of ALL the songs! Spikes! Hell yeah! *Is hit by Wanka Bars.* X.X *Gets back up.* So you're obsessed. It's chocolate, it's all good. *Reads one shot.* Ah, never seen it done this way before. Yeah, it fits this story well, good job for being unconventional again. Yes, still love the chapter, and think it's great that you used Spike's [from Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel universe] song. It's just perfect that the One Vampire that got to sing--and a rock anthem style song no less [well the char is a Brit]--is just perfect for Seto, the *emotionally* dead, but recovering, button-down billionaire. So far, the story is wonderful, the interactions are interesting, and I'm glad you're sticking to your guns about how this is all going to unfold. I'm also liking the potential multiple layers that I see. Yep, still going to have to keep poking you about this. Oh! Personal Note: It'll take me a week to beta things, not two, save for Mid-term and Finals weeks.
| Reviewed By: Tamlin, the lazy On: August 24, 2005 23:26 CDT
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I adored this chapter. The scenes with Jou playing slave were just hillarious. I just rolled on the floor. Leave it to Kaiba to think of something that evil. I like Marik as an off center loonie, who occasionally reverts back. I'm curious what you're going to do with Bakura though. I think that this is the first time I've seen a Bakura/Jou from ancient Egypt and you've got me all wondering and speculating now. What happened back then? Why did poor Jono kill himself? Will the past do a replay in the present? Questions, quesions... Also, what's up with Honda? He seems to have a few Kaiba issues... Great work, as always. All hail Goddess Velvetina. ps. I actually found this over on AFF and darted over here to read it. I still don't get notices about your story for some reason, but I'm still loyally addicted!
| Reviewed By: Tamlin who isn't logged on On: July 12, 2005 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhrg! Psycho yamis! Run away, run away! (lol) I love it. Sorry about being so tardy reviewing, for some reason MM doesn't tell me when you update and I have to go check periodically to see what's up with you. This was a great chapter. I really liked how you used the song. Update soon. I can't wait to see what you're going to do next!
| Title: ^o^
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(place logged me out!) On: July 03, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep-yep! Ans I loves ya too! Loved the end of the chappie.
| Title: *Huggly-Love-Cuddle-Glomp-Love-Suggle-Glomp-Hug* Part 2!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! See, I wrote it one way already, but I'm going to rewrite it for the other story, so we get to see the event from a few different sides. A funny thing about that, a male friend looked the original version of it over . . . and said I had inadvertently killed Jou.~.~;; I didn't mean to make Seto THAT big. ~.~;; So I found a way for Jou to live (Go magic Lube! XD), but as fate had it, one of my fur friends pointed me towards a fur oriented site that had info on possible stats for dragon anatomy. So I can now fully rewrite it so Jou lives And it's not completely unbelievable that he does. XD (I don't know why I torture him so, I truly don't mean to, and yet it's become a habit in my stories. . . yeah I'm working on another unrelated Y/Y, with a S/J side, and I'm putting him through an emotional ringer in that one too. . . I really need to stop doing that to him.) Ah well, I've rambled long enough (and I had to post 2 reviews to do it! ^^;;) so I should just reiterate the "I'll always luv you, and I have way too much patience and stuff to occupy my time when I don't. XD" Much love always! P.S. e-mail me whenever for the lemon, the "Magic Lube" one is all written up and separated from all the other spoilers for that reality. I might need some time to deal with school thing and reread/spell check (forgive the American spelling) but otherwise it's done. And dedicated to you, and after you read it, you'll probably be able to see why that chp will be called "Silent Night". ^_^
| Title: *Huggly-Love-Cuddle-Glomp-Love-Suggle-Glomp-Hug*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! Is all ok, I'll never stop lovin' ya. XD *waves hand dismissive-ly* Don't worry about the e-mail, I have a tendency to forget about my hotmail, and I know life can do that thing where it sucks for a long amount of time. You're not the only one who takes ages between updates now and again (hey, I'm only on chp 8 of that fic + prologue, and I've been working on it since Aug. 04). And look at how long it's taken me to respond to you! School work will do that to you. And you can never go wrong with Mokie being and evil little blighter/bugger/sod/etc. (Yay "brit-coms" for teaching me random bits of the language my English is a bastardization of. XD) It's most of Mokie's charm, and too few use it. Mwahahahaaa, all of my Cannon stories will have him as being too smart/evil for his own good. Mmmmm . . . Kaiba in "Silent Night" outfit . . . *drools* If you don't mind, I may steal that for some humor or AU fics, it just screams to be seen in public where people's jaws can drop. *Bows* I'm not worthy to have this outfit dedicated to me, and I am eternally touched by this gesture. And speaking of dedications, well I had always planed to do a companion S/J/S story to my Y/Y story, but one of the chapters will probably be named for your Christmas fic (and every one else can think it's the song. XD) *Gets hit with an epiphany* Of curse! The chp w/the S/J/S lemon! I can call it "Silent Night"! It will fit with my naming scheme And it works no matter who's P.O.V. it's in! | Reviewed By: moonstar_dust [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 12:08 CDT
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This story is awesome! I love it. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: April 09, 2005 15:54 CDT
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I'm might tie you to a chair and force you to listen to "We are the Champions" until you update. I still can't figure out this manual for bringing people back to life for some reason they always end up evil with the name "Roger". Ever notice everybody who is brought back from the dead is named "Roger"? Good to see you're breaking the trend and Bringing back Marik! Is that what Bakura is doing? I can't wait to see how all the hidden plots turn out. Duke and Tristan, did Seto meet Tristan while he was with his stepfather Tristan got hurt or something? Are you going to bash Tristan? I want to know what happens but take your time I mcg't want some little trashy piece most authors do just to make people like me shut up. I guess annoying people never pays. Sigh. Thank You. DK;) P.S. Read anything of Dragondreamer Yami Dragon's stuff. One Way street is my favorite. As well as Chibi B channie's Tales of Crimson nights. It's finished on ff.net. Great authors. I may never live up to their and you greatness.
| Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm finally catching up with all the ficies that I've missed lately, and I have REALY missed yours. Poor Seto, makes you happy that his adoptive father met a sidewalk so suddenly. All worship you. Keep up the great work.
| Title: Yay! You’re alive! *Huggle-Glomp*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 04, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was worried something had happened to you, or that you didn't get my e-mail. Well the plan had been to send it to you via yahoo, but MM.org doesn't work the way I thought it did. However, I have it posted as a hidden story here at MM.org, but be aware that I have a tendency to update lots of chapters at once. What's up now isn't too different from what I have on my comp, but it's the little things that get you. Anyway it's at http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/75198/ , well what I have up is there. Feel free to read it or whatever, or e-mail me at happydragon411@yahoo.com for future chapters. And thank you for dedicating the bonus short, *waterfall tears* even if I have to share it's still nice! And I love how this time they started to draw together a bit more. Whoot! Mokei was smart enough to drug Seto into sleeping! So few people have him do things like that. But the chap summery said something was happening inside someone's body? What did you mean by that? There were a few possibilities for what it could have been, but I honestly don't know what you meant. Oh well, until next chappy!
| Title: Mree .. =D
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another awesome chapter. Jou and Seto were getting along so well, I would have sworn I'd see a lemon, or at least a kiss. But no, you're stingy and like to tease people! Lol.. Mokuba drugged Seto's drink again! And what's up with the crappy ass Yugi and Yami drama, no one like them! Damnit, oh and what was with that little Ryou and Bakura moment? As for Seto's 'memory'.. HORRIBLE. You cruel, miserable person! How could you do that to Seto??! Although, it does explain why he wouldn't want to talk about it and why he's so messed up. Oh yeah, and I'm lost as to why Jou couldn't feel the kiss and how come he only found out why when he was 14? You're confusing me! Naw, it's all good. Update the next chapter soon..!! (fweeeee! =P)
| Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:23 CST
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Hey, that is good. Hope that Jou can help him. I put you on my list so that I`ll know when you update. I love this story. Keep up the good work.
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 08:21 CST
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Wow, I'm so glad you updated, I hope ytou continue to soon, anyway great chapter and I can't wait to read more. Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooOOoooo yay another good SetoxJou fic for me.....*chibigrin* i really like this story and im lookin forward to where its going....btw the lemon wasnt bad at all. i liked it. and i hope you update soon cause i really wanna know what happens next!!!!
| Reviewed By: blue bura On: October 09, 2004 06:20 CDT
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WOW ^________^ cool story!! i love it!-oh and nice lemon ^_- cant wait for the up date ^^
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