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Reviewed By: inuyashalover777 On: April 18, 2006 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this this fanfick it was so beautiful **sniff** **sniff** this is my first time writting a review so u had better b happy because i give this a 100/10
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Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I saw this recomended in the Beta thread about How not to write a crapy Inuyasha fic. It came highly recomended and I must say that Im glad I read this. I normaly dont care for fics that start right in with sex, but this was done tastefully. Im going to keep this in my favorites section so that I can #1 Keep it as a refrence for a guide to a well written story and 2, to share it with others. Thank you for writing this and proving to me that there are intelligent Inuyasha fans out there.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...I read this a while ago and now I am reveiwing it...I tend to do that :(...anyway, excellent story! I thought your style was unique..the idea, I have definatly seen before, but you took it and you made it your own! I love it when a writer does that. It shows people that even though certain things have been done before, you can still take it, and tweak it, and make it unique and different! Keep up the excellent writing and I definatly look foreward to more of your stories!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:50 CDT
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Well,well, I usually hate AUs, but this one just sucked me in...maybe because I could relate to it, maybe because you kept everyone pretty in-character. But anyway, I commend you! You've taught me that not all AUs are evil (just 95% of them LOL).
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
had to review again!! i loved it!!! -huggles- great job!
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Title: Starfire27
Reviewed By: Starfire27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was an amazing story. The drama and plot were very creative. I loved this story. You are a very good writer and I hope you make another fan fic soon because i already know i'll love it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 24, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! great work!
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: cute_kag On: August 24, 2004 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. great story of indecisiveness ( is that even a word?) and confusion. anyway hope you write other incredible stories :)
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Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To begin with, thank you. This story was absolutely wonderful. I could see the hard work, detail, devotion, character, and the inevitable part of you that went into this. When all of those things combine in a piece of art, for indeed this is art, everything seems to fall into place; everything feels natural; above all, everything is incredible. I could believe this story. The characters, they weren't a story; they weren't words; they were real people. You have captured the human pshyche and all-around soul (for lack of a better term) in words and sentences. I almost felt like I could actually see the characters, like, if I reached out, I would be able to touch them. I don't know how to explain it, but...do you know that feeling you get when you've read a really incredible piece of literature? That is what I'm feeling right now. It's almost like...satisfaction. The reason for the 9 in spelling and grammar was that there were a few times when a word would be missing or a typo was made. It didn't really detract from the story, but it was noticeable. A big round of applause to you for this.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Kikyou Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I´ll never understand mediaminer and this shit... -_- Anyways, I loved! Ice cream huh? I´m wondering what Kagome imagined XD Very nice, you´re such a perfect writer!
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: August 22, 2004 18:57 CDT
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hahaha aww.. poor inuyasha and ice cream.. PAY BACK IS SWEET! i love this story... lol please update soon!!!!! ^-^ POOR NURSE....
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: August 22, 2004 15:59 CDT
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the ending was funny that she wanted ice cream after what inuyasha just told her what her eating ice cream did to him. lol. well great chapter can't wait until you update. which i hope is soon
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: August 22, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what it is, but you are one of my favorite writers of all time. I guess it's your style of writting, humor and cliff hangers. Or maybe it's the original plots that constantly have me hooked from the first chapter. What ever it is, keep doing what you do, because you do it well :) I can't wait for that next chapter, you spit them out fast, but they are always amazing. P.S. if you need a beta reader, I'm avalible. Just email me *lol*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 22, 2004 14:42 CDT
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lol alrite kag rules! u rule too cuz i love this story and ur doing an amazing job with it
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Reviewed By: Lally-chan On: August 22, 2004 11:40 CDT
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Each time better! Congratulations! Are you going to stop writing paper moon?
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