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Reviewed By: CandyLipsWithPoisonKiss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 20:30 CDT
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A friend of mine who is an author on fanfiction.net was telling me about a story she read a few years back that she LOVED and wished that she could show me, but it she couldn't find it anywhere. Imagine her surprise when I let her mess with my mm.org account and she stumbled upon this! She immediately added it to my favorites and forced me to read the first chapter in front of her. I am so glad she did! This is already an awesome fic with well developed characters and emotions. It has a good balance of dialog, introspection, interaction, and plot movement. I can't wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: joellesophya On: December 29, 2006 13:58 CST
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Your story is awesome and I just wanted to know if it was complete. Thx and good job!
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Title: great storyyyyyy
Reviewed By: coptic_angel On: April 26, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great great fic. I really love it to the point that it's the second time I am reading it. and by the way the name Malaika that you picked for van's daughter actually means angels in my native language..which is actually perfect name because she is gonna have wings when she grows up
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Reviewed By: joellesophya On: March 11, 2006 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful!!!!!I've read it like 5 times and still not getting bored!!!I've been waiting for the update for like five months!It's killing me...I'm begging you update soon.. Thx ~joellesophya~
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Reviewed By: joellesophya On: March 11, 2006 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful!!!!!I've read it like 5 times and still not getting bored!!!I've been waiting for the update for like five months!It's killing me...I'm begging you update soon.. Thx ~joellesophya~
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Reviewed By: joellesophya On: March 11, 2006 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful!!!!!I've read it like 5 times and still not getting bored!!!I've been waiting for the update for like five months!It's killing me...I'm begging you update soon.. Thx ~joellesophya~
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Reviewed By: joellesophya On: March 11, 2006 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful!!!!!I've read it like 5 times and still not getting bored!!!I've been waiting for the update for like five months!It's killing me...I'm begging you update soon.. Thx ~joellesophya~
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(nsi) On: September 30, 2005 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u r oficially my hero! thank u soooo much for updating this story, i absolutly love it. dont wait too long to update again k. arigato
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Title: heart of the dragon
Reviewed By: fatal_katana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, what a cliffhanger, i like how you describe everything in this story, please update soon, i am desperate to find out what happens next, please update soon
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Reviewed By: Folken_Fanel19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your fan fic, I read all 30 chapters in just over a day, I just couldn't put it down....I dont have much of a life at the moment, I know...The latest chapter was sooo sad :'( continue with the wonderful job, i hope there is an update coming soon, i'll be watching. ^_^
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hats off to u my dear!!!! standing ovation i love your story. u almost made me cry with that last chapter...actually im whiping my eyes now...ahem...anyway PLEASE in the name of all things sacred and holy update soon!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz *gets down on knees* for my sanity sake update.
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Reviewed By: dragon's kitty On: July 24, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh.... This is a very good story! Question: Where's the story "What You Wouldn't Want"? I started reading it on ff.net, but then they unjustly kicked you off, and then I can't find it here.... If you could, could you put it up?
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Reviewed By: dragon's kitty On: July 24, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:huggle: This is such a good story!!! I d it how Hitomi always had to go home in the end, and now this is making me feel better!!! :bug eyes: He's doing WHAT! If Merle doesn't kill the , by any deity I'm going to her! But then again, I'd be doing something against the law. :looks thoughtfull:
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: pure hope [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the best have you finished it if not please contine i love it, its soooo sweet and has that hole 'love concors all' sorta vibe and that is the best kinnda fic u can hav please contine i relly do love the fic ^.^
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Reviewed By: JOJOOOO On: March 23, 2005 18:50 CST
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i really like this fanfic ( ive been reading it on ff.net so i was really sad when they erased it)...Continue the good work.++
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