| "Guilty As Charged" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: November 30, 2004 23:55 CST
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Awesome chapter! Poor Inu, maybe Shippo's right and even Kagome can't heal his wounds. *sigh* Ooh that made me so mad that Kohaku's ass of a foster mother was beating him with a baseball bat!!!!! *Scowls at child abusers* Oh, and the drug-pushing Miroku thing pissed me off too. I hope he sees the 'error of his ways' or whatever. Jerk. LOL, I'm not emotionally involved in this story, no no, not at all! *whistles innocently* Well anyways, thank you for braving the pressures of real life and releasing this chapter! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
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Reviewed By: Darkmiko_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 16:38 CDT
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Update, dammit. You've got to! I'm dying from anticipation here!!
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"...[N]ot all men are of the devil"? This is Miroku we're talking about. "She" will probably turn him into a eunuch! Anyway, I am so loving this story. And you get points from the grammar nazi (uhm, that's me...). I have actually stopped reading fics because of the grammar and (lack of) writing skill. But, this is one of those sparkly fics that stands out. Not to mention it's original and very interesting. I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: October 19, 2004 16:44 CDT
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[snicker] i luffled this chapter. and now everybody's assuming the Miroku and Kagome are together... makes for some interesting little things in the future, i'd guess. update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: heniya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Out of all the Inuyasha fics I've read, yours is one of the most original! Keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 16:16 CDT
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Ah, so glad you updated! I really enjoy reading this; it's such a refreshing twist. Lavender
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Title: Guilty As Charged
Reviewed By: fld On: September 17, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
RAOR! WHY WON'T YOU FUCKING UPDATE! Lol, sorry i'm a bit obsessive with my fanfics; it turns into an addiction real quick, and then it's worse than coffee, or cocain. please update. i'd really like to read the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You left me hanging... and you piqued my curiosity! Great fic, I can;t wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Clutzoid On: August 31, 2004 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo not status:completed keep going please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please keep going
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Title: Netiri
Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 08:47 CDT
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^^ i really like this so far--please update soon! --Netiri
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Title: Netiri
Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 08:45 CDT
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really good work! i hope to see an update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: Lavender Valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 17:08 CDT
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This is really great; you've got an interesting plot going here. Your character's conversations are well done, too. Keep it up! Lavender
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 16:29 CDT
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Awesome story!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 13:25 CDT
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Hmm...this is interesting! Are you going to have Kagome turn "Nancy Drew" and play detective once she hears Inu's story and believes him? Since Inu's thing is always about protecting Kagome, it would be interesting to see if he could manage that while in juvie hall... And just how are we going to have Inu-Kag feel sparks for one another with the awful way they just met?? I'm pondering your next move. Can't wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:10 CDT
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nice job!! ^_^ i really like it! cant wait to raed more ! update soon
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