| "Signs Of Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: burning
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:55 CDT
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from writer to writer: YAY! GO KIBA, YOU SEXINESS, YOU
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Title: Ayume has fallen hard
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, Ayume felt something there didnt she?
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Title: keep writing
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it but i have to be honest: it was a bit strieght forward and yet somewhat confusing, but i got the gist of it....keep writing.;)
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Title: Kiba is savvy's and you know it!
Reviewed By: savvy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Moose! you are awesome! on to the next chapter....
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 18:16 CDT
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Reviewed By: Qveenie klu On: September 05, 2004 18:07 CDT
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YAYERS! i so happy and i don't know (or care) why!!! u sure this is Kiba/ayume? jeez, he's being very neutral about her. good grief. but then again, i have no idea who any of these characters are, so.... GOOD JOB!
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Reviewed By: Star Opal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really liking this story, and I can't wait to see more. You keep on going you lil 'writing machine'!
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Reviewed By: twilight aura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 17:14 CDT
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update!!!!!!!!!!^^ i love this story!^^ so you better update!^^
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Reviewed By: grrrr....... On: August 20, 2004 18:50 CDT
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I'm only doing this so I can see my reviews. Stupid mm.org...*grumble grumble*
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow that was really good. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tis me old chappess! thy QUEENIE! On: August 18, 2004 00:12 CDT
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hewo mon friendy person! i read it, and even tho i have no idea who anyone is, i fink it's v coolio!! keep oop the good vork, while i tell cai and ging, kay?
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Title: good
Reviewed By: ildemoncatwwings On: August 17, 2004 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really liked this chapter. kinda slower than the first, but as you said, it'll pick up as it goes. all i gotta say about the excerp you sent is MEANY! i really hope you get that next chapter finished soon cus i'm gonna go crazy. lol i still think you should draw a few pics to go along with your story. there are so many great pics that can be drawn from th images you described. well, its almost 1:00 am so i g2g to bed. i liked this chapter and the imagry involved. hope you write another one soon- ans dont forget about PA either! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 22:56 CDT
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Wow that was really cool. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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Title: og my god!
Reviewed By: lildemoncatwwings On: August 15, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD I LOVED IT!!! IT WAS SHORT, BUT I STILL LOVED IT! i'm really glade you decided to write the story. i was so afraid youd just give up on the idea and not do it. maybe i just like it because i saw the movie and know that your story is going to accent it alot, but i'm still really glade you wrote it. you know, you could draw some really great pictures using some of the images that you created in the story. if i could draw worth crap i might try to draw the ones i'm seeing, but i cant so i wont, but i hope you might consider it...hint hint. anywho, i cant wait for the next chapter to come out as well as the next ppa chapter. take care!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 00:00 CDT
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Wow this is really good. Please update soon.
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