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Reviewed By: Kylarkallana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 21:10 CDT
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OMG you can NOT just leave us hanging like that. Update SOOON!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!???
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Title: JPatt (not logged in)
Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 23:33 CDT
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holy crap, most random story, i found this fic on adultfanfiction.net and here i was today browsing stories because it is one of those weird random days i have internet. Anyway i found this story here! I had to re read the whole thing because i had forgotten most of it. Certain details did however stand out. But Hey i'm happy you are continuing with it, and so recently you were on here i might add. Hope to have another update soon.
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Title: JPatt (not logged in)
Reviewed By: JPatt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 23:32 CDT
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holy crap, most random story, i found this fic on adultfanfiction.net and here i was today browsing stories because it is one of those weird random days i have internet. Anyway i found this story here! I had to re read the whole thing because i had forgotten most of it. Certain details did however stand out. But Hey i'm happy you are continuing with it, and so recently you were on here i might add. Hope to have another update soon.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2008 01:20 CDT
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keiko's grandparents have no idea who they are screwing around with. poor keiko losing her parents is tough. hiei and kurama will take care of her though. update soon. i want to know what happen when the cops show up.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 01:54 CDT
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please update. i want to know what happens with keikos dragon. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I really wanna know what going to happen next. The ending of the last chapter left you hanging. I hope to be able to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady MoonShadow1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this fic! I can't wait to see Kurama and Shiori make up! Sweetness! MSF
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Reviewed By: PhoenixFlames [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ohh it's so good. I want to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 22:33 CST
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*blinks* I swear there were 5 chapters yesterday... hm... ARG! You took it down? How inhumanly cruel... I'm glad you got Kurama's mom too accept the fact... for a moment there I thought she would think about suicide... that scared me. Hm, did I mention I like this pairing and all the possibilities that come with it?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo. that's a good oooo. update soon. make a happy ending for everyone please, sorry, I'm a sucker for romance and happy endings. *on knees* please update soon. *fell over* I have no coodination, sorry, but I was on my knees begging for a quick update, but I fell over. I'm still asking for an update. CHapter two was an interesting twist, in fact so was chapter one. ^_^ update soon. I know that I've already said that, but whenever I ask, it takes forever for the person to update, so please don't take forever. I luv your fic.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:32 CST
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Er... just a thought, as I won't be able to finish this tonight... but shouldn't you add 'hentai' to the categories? At least... 'cause there is a lotta hentai in here.... And you don't want some person who doesn't read this stuff to stumble across your story and fall over dead or something, now do you? Though Personally, I'd find that amusing... Heh, I'm really glad you didn't do a scene between Yuuske and Botan... it just didn't seem right...
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 23:15 CST
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Ah yeah... I'm either going to continue this chapter by chapter review or not... I'm embarassed now... About my last review... The only reason I asked that was because I would think Hiei would have had a more immediate reaction... This was an unexpected twist however... But I have never seen this pairing, but am all for it! :D I can't wait to read more! So far, I guess any problem that would be with your story is the format of the first chapter! I'll review when I finish them all, I'm going to add this story to my favorites. :D:):)*is so happy!* A pairing I have not seen! YAY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 22:58 CST
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Hm, I just finished chapter one, but so far, I have a few comments. First of all, the format has gone haywire, it's bold, and it seems to be missing a few words and quotation marks here and there. Also... I may not be experienced in this, and I may have acidentally skipped over it, but wasn't Keiko a virgin? Unless she and Yuuske had sex before, there is really no reason why you should have omitted that fact. Yes, nit-picky, but it was bothering me. Hm... now to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kitzune71 On: December 02, 2004 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story very much!!I love the pairings !Please update soon!! Kitzune71
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 06:36 CST
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God I love that Kurama! He's one sexy kitsune for sure!! Chapter 3 was just plain HOT! I'm surprized more stories dont'have that type of 3-way sex in them. Maybe I'm just not reading the right ones, hee he. And speaking for myself, I don't mind yaoi in the least. So whatever you're thinkin' of writing, it's not gonna offend me. Anyway....Poor Shuichi. But I know his mother will come around in the end. Isn't that our greatest asset as mothers? To be able to love and accept our children through thick and thin? He'll be crushed if she doesen't but I have faith. Also, although I love Youko, I really like how you've expressed his personality through Kurama without really adding him as a 3rd lover for Keiko. That would really be alot to juggle. And the fact that Kurama just KNOWS what to do and is teaching the others is hot stuff too. Oh yeah. Can't wait for more!!
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