| "Because You Never Knew" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: Part 11
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, that was so....steamy! I loved that love scene that you wrote out and I hope that you update soon even if it seems that you haven't posted since December. Good luck with idea writing and all that stuff. Good job! n.n
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Title: Part 10
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, are you trying to make me cry? T.T And poor Gaara, what do they have against him? He's a cute, cuddly panda ^.^; Anywho, that was a good part! Loved it, gotta read more!
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Title: Part 9
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! Gaara! -glompses and kidnaps- gotta love that red head. n.n This was another good part. Have got to read more so I'll cut it short: good story. Bye. ^.^'
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Title: Part 8
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naruto makes me cry. The only other person that makes me cry this much is Gaara and Naruto and he are so much alike. This is a great story and unlike anything I've read so far, and I've read quite a lot of them...some good and some very bad -.- Anywho, good job!
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Title: Part 7
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god, I know what you mean about ff.net never letting you log on or letting you post or search at times! So frustrating...anyway! o.o omg...the last part of that chapter was shocking. It was intense and did make me shed a tear.
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Title: Part 6
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it may be corney, but I thought it was still good! XD I really liked this interaction between Naruto and Kakashi. It was so awesome. Keep writing them and I'll keep reading them. Off I go to read the next one, heh n.n
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Title: Part 5
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That definately brought the tears. Naruto! T.T -huggles the blonde- I've always loved you! Damn Sasuke v.v Another great part! On to more! >.>
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Title: Part 4
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This part was great as well. So well written and poor Naruto! What did Itachi do to him? T.T I love Itachi, really I do..he's my third fav character, but he sucks if he hurt Naruto >.< I can't wait to read more and Naruto being a Hunter is awesome! It's like this KakaNaru fanfic I read called Mended Hearts! Read it, trust me, it's good! And now, on with the fifth part!
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Title: Part 3
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bad Kakashi, bad Kakashi! T.T Makes me want to cry but still not there yet...okay, that's because Dir en grey and Gazette is keeping me company but trust me, I doubt I can hold back the tears! >.< Awesome chapter, I expect to read more very soon...which is, now. ^.^
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: shattered-words [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to review cause I'm over whelmed by this fanfic. I enjoyed the first two parts and now am about to read the third parts. Oh, and I at times cry in some Disney movies too XD I know how you feel cause it pisses me off to no end at how damn sentimental I can be. It's strange that does things make me cry but sad things that happen to me in rl don't... Huh, how interesting. Anywho! I loved this story and I have to read more! Good job on this! ^.^
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Title: Jaw Droppers
Reviewed By: Mixed-Starz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 07:20 CST
Comment/Review:
( toads are croaking and leaves are rustling. The sound of children laughing can be heard.) ITAI! That was the bestest fanfic I've ever seen! I'd give it a damn thumbs up man! I also cried man! Tell you something: While reading your fanfic, I was listening to music. And during those sad memories part, the sad musics came on, and on the happy parts (though not many) vice versa. Mystical eh? Please update soon! Add in a little mix and match, and improve your colour of summeries! That way people will flick to you! >_< Oh, btw before I gtg, your story was great, but why you've onli gotten 19 reviews? Man, I'am gonna introduce this story to som of mie frienz... UPDATE! (clap clap)
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
good story. i hope u update this soon. cant wait 2 read sum kakanaru!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 21:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Good plot keep it up looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowDemon13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 06:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good so far, and I cant wait for more. Kakashi/Naruto is a pairing I really enjoy.
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. Update soon man. Update soon.
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