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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh MAN, such angst! I want them to be together happily ever after!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:27 CDT
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K. Mi confused. But it sounded good. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:36 CDT
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No, not this. It's not fair. I hope Kagome saves him in time. And then he can beat the tar out of Tsubaki. Please update and let us see the ending of this angst part. Please. Bye
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:26 CDT
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Reviewed By: essies2 On: September 27, 2004 19:47 CDT
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no not the ring anyting but the ring please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 27, 2004 17:47 CDT
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Excellent chapter! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: inuyasha fangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 09:07 CDT
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great chapter a lil confussing for me but owell its probably cuz i haven't read this story for awhile, hope u update asap! ~Melissa~
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Krystal, I just wanted to personally tell you that I feel your work is very good. I honestly did not know your age, and now that I know your age and see how well you write, it is very impressive. I just finished taking scriptwriting (in college) for my animation and game art & design degree; I have seen some really bad writing and some really good ones. Your writing style and skill is exceptional. I also remind all the readers to critique correctly, intelligently and professionally. In class we critique daily, and it is done right. If not, we do not get any respect out of it, especially since it makes you look very dumb when you do not critique correctly! I love your work, you are more than above your level. Keep it up! -Katgome
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 01:08 CDT
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Ok, I am a little lost in this story. But I hope to see more things come together as the chapters go along. If I still have some questions about things later on, I'll be sure to let you know. Just one piece of advice. Look at your grammar. I got lost when Kikyo would say "thy" instead of "my" a lot. 'Thy" refers to others not the one speaking. Just so you know. But please take a look at your grammar and sentence structure. I don't remember it being on the low level in your other story. Hope this gives you good advice and helps others to understand better. Bye
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 22:42 CDT
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Ok. So you are continuing the story right? If so, then I can wait. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever nli On: September 22, 2004 17:10 CDT
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Dude, thats ok! My b-day is in Oct. too! LIBRA'S KICK ASS! No offense other people.....happy early b-day! *sweatdrop*
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 22, 2004 15:43 CDT
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I know it is a little early but happy birthday! I hope you have an excellent day. With regards to the story...life gets in the way. The older you get the more things you have to do and the less time you have to write. Don't feel like you have to apologise because it happens to us all and anyone who either fails to or chooses to ignore that fact isn't worth listening to. It's a good story...to be utterly truthful there are bit where it seems a little flakey but regardless it is an enjoyable read and I have taken great pleasure in reading your work and in the end I believe that is all that matters. That you enjoy writing it and others enjoy reading it. That is my messgae to everyone. My apologies for going on for so long. Please accept my best wishes and once again my regards for your upcoming birthday. Good luck & best wishes as always, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 22:44 CDT
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I hope your day will be a happy one. I got the day off because it's my birthday. I hope that you get good reviews as gifts from all of your readers.
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Reviewed By: Laina On: September 19, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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I must say this is not living up to your other stories.Its hard to follow and it isn't grabbing me like your others did. It has lots of action but it is lacking something very much... it is lacking any real feeling. Please don't be mad about me saying this, i just wanted to let you know how i felt... very disappointed.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: September 19, 2004 17:08 CDT
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I understand now, sorry, got confused by the previous chapter, I think it's because I'm tired. Excellent chapter if a little sad. I can't help but wonder if something is significant about Inuyasha's upcoming change, look forwards to finding out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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