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Reviewed By: i only pretend to be sleeping On: May 03, 2005 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm hooked. Keep up the good work, m'lady. Especially love the Ayame/Mine relationship...the poor guy deserves some happiness after...well, everything. It was a really effective device to have Akito having the ability to restore memories. Sigh, I'm hanging out for a bit of a Yukiru, but I'm easy. Hope the sleep situation is improving. I hear it's only the first 3 months you have to worry about, so I guess that's something.
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Title: ARIGATO, MIINASAN!
Reviewed By: Frankie Crow On: May 02, 2005 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEESSSSS!!!!! I AM BEYOND HAPPY! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. (showers you with kisses) I'm sorry where are my manners, your a married woman! (HUG) There. But i honestly have to say, I need a lemon! pleeeeaaaase let there be a lemon between Hatori and Tohru. And hopefully Hitoshi would dissapear forever. Again thank you thank you tk tk tk tk...! But please when is the next chapter coming up?! I NEEED MOOOOOOOORE. xoxoxo~ Frankie Crow
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Title: ARIGATO, MIINASAN!
Reviewed By: Frankie Crow On: May 02, 2005 21:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEESSSSS!!!!! I AM BEYOND HAPPY! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. (showers you with kisses) I'm sorry where are my manners, your a married woman! (HUG) There. But i honestly have to say, I need a lemon! pleeeeaaaase let there be a lemon between Hatori and Tohru. And hopefully Hitoshi would dissapear forever. Again thank you thank you tk tk tk tk...! But please when is the next chapter coming up?! I NEEED MOOOOOOOORE. xoxoxo~ Frankie Crow
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: May 01, 2005 02:21 EDT
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Rut Ro. She's pregnaught and she doesn't remember a thing. Interesting thing to happen! Please continue, this is getting rather interesting and I hope you keep it up!!!
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Title: Wonderful Story
Reviewed By: Hato Shino On: April 30, 2005 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful. I have read a lot of Fruits Basket fanfictions but this one is certainly in the top five. ^_^ And I understand how stressful life can be. I hope you can update as soon as you get the time. Again wonderful story!
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Title: Wonderful!!
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 10:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! YOU GOTTA WRITE MORE!!! I mean shes back to normal..and doesn't have the slightest clue about her son and husband. Its just to good..you gotta write more soon.^^
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Title: im not logged in -.-
Reviewed By: Twilight_Aura On: April 30, 2005 04:11 EDT
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0-0...........omg...noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!she doesnt remember her son!!!!!!!::falls to floor and weeps::but i think now that she has her old memories everything will be even cooler!:wipes tears::i luv twists in stories >.>.....plz update!^^ive had this story on my faves since like..the first chapter!XD but i was too lazy to ever comment cause i had to read like 300 other updated stories X.x
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Reviewed By: trunks1gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a beautiful story, I don't know why but I feel like crying now. (tear) It's so good. Wonderfull twist! It's hard to express how much I'm enjoying it. WAH! I love Hatori! He's so sweet! I't makes me sad to know after all of that pain hes still alone. That's why I have to write Pro Hatori fics. Haha. Anyways, I can't wait for more! Actually I can, haha but not to long. lol. Once again very good. -trunksgirl
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Reviewed By: cold*as*ice* On: April 27, 2005 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...This story is sooo great!! I just can't wait to read the next chapters...! I rarely liked fanfics which include OCs but this one is not bad at all! On the contrary, it made the story much more appealing!! This is just the kind of fanfic I would like to read from beginning to end... keep it up! : )
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Reviewed By: Andane On: April 20, 2005 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your work is absolutely AMAZING!!! I've been reading this ever since it started... and only figured out I could comment today. Yes, I guess I AM slow... But please, don't strain yourself too hard. That wouldn't really be a good thing, now, would it? Keep it up! *hugs*
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Title: Oh My
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will happen next? a baby? oh my.. WRITE MORE!!!!
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Title: More!!!!
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just so good. please write more. i love it!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Lisha Lane On: April 15, 2005 15:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
everything: 10!!!!! OH MY GOD! this is such a good story! when i saw that the new chapter was out, i ran around screaming! this is the best fruits basket story ever and all i want is MORE MORE MORE!!! please tell me that tohru ends up with kyo because he is sooo sad and lonely. Make tohru dump her stupid husband so she can marry kyo! GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: Frankie cRoW On: April 14, 2005 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will beg for more. Even if my knees are bruised and scapped with blood ozzing out through the wounds, i am willing to beg and beg again for more of your writing. Please please please tell me that Tohru will forget Hitoshi and open her eyes to the truth and see Hatori as her true love.
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Reviewed By: phalon22 (nsi) On: April 14, 2005 17:58 EDT
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Oh well, great chapter. Very cool, however I'm not sure who I want Tohru to end up with! Update soon!
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