Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fic. don't say this lightly, and while yoai relationships can...be...difficult to explain, the feelings and storyline are really quite good. I especially like the design of Bakura, as most of the time he's viewed as just evil, not having any good to him. REALLY enjoyed reading about his development as the story went on. While you oversimplified Yugi and Yami's relationship (not much, but no deeper connection like in some fics) its very good nevertheless. Just wish you can finish this up, and even though it is overdone, please, please, please do something for Joey, and give Kaiba some sort of personality back, instead of the asshole you've portrayed, he is much more than that. Just my opinion, disregard it as you wish. Still, I'd like to see everyone make it out alive, including all the mind-slaved people, they've been through hell and back, and at the very least, Noah (American version spelling from the anime, sorry if it conflicts) deserves a real body, he just needs someone to remind him of his humanity, give a chance for some time for him to argue with Bakura about it, he'd be the best one for it.
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