| "One Less Star, Book 1" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Title: WOAH
Reviewed By: sesshyluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOAH! I REALLY LIKED IT! Ooops, capslock is on...heh heh anyways... i really liked it and hope you update soon, oh and for Sessh's uncle... 'What the fuck?'
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 12:31 CST
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I read it again to be sure I was right. I am. I forgot to mention however, how much I enjoy the dialogue you have written. The voice of the characters is true and quite funny in spots. Anyway, it's wonderful.
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Title: 10 of 10
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 09:45 CST
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This is easily one of the best stories I've read, and I speak with some authority when I say that. I look forward to reading more of your work. It is well thought out and I love your use of language. Some people may have trouble looking up the big words, but they should probably be reading something more at their level if this proves too difficult.
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Reviewed By: RaggieRonie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lucient wouldn't say it, so I will. Your fictions blow. There is zero dimension and depth to your characters. No one speaks like your characters do and the descriptions are lackluster at best. You're too full of yourself to be a good author. At least he is open to suggestion. You still need alot of work yourself and I'd go as far as to say I like him better because his work is clever and fun. These are just the writings of an old bitter fat bitch.
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Reviewed By: arazan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! but i hope you update soon >.
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Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: supersailorfanner
Reviewed By: super_sailor_fanner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 15:20 CST
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omg. omfg. omgomgomg!!! this is the best fanfic i've ever read...inuyahsa seemed a bit harsh...but of course one can't keep the charaters excatly like they are.....but they still sound like themselves....it's so believable! except for sango and inu! bleck! haha, lol jk! this is so good! i hope it doesn't end here.....keep up the good work! ^^
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 06:08 CST
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Weird how that happened. I was commenting on someone else's entry. Sorry bout that. I think it happened because I was going to read your fiction, but I didn't have time to, and when I logged back in to comment on Kiki's fic it took me here. Go for the removal request.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 06:05 CST
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I refuse to read anymore of this fic if he keeps calling Kikyou Kiki. I'm not fucking kidding, I don't like it. I don't see how you could stomach it! lol. I knew that shit was gonna happen, but I thought Inu would spy her in the cafe with suikotsu. Damned angst. If people would just say what they mean, I mean, god. lol.
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Title: kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you update soon.
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Reviewed By: wing_hai (not logged in) On: September 01, 2005 06:10 CDT
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Please update. I can't wait to see what happens next. It's such an amazing story, you're so creative. Very original. I love it.
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Title: One Leaa Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:08 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: dragoninu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:50 CDT
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Whew. That was gorgeous. . . I can't wait to see more. . .*whine*
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Title: One Less Star, Book 1
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 22:51 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: PuckRG [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
W00t! That last chapter was...*Fans self* You know, when I read your review I thought I wouldn't like these pairings. I've never liked InuXSango. But I think you're really making them work. Your plotting is excellent and the idea of the "thousand Kagomes" and her destiny is very intriguing. I really didn't like Inuyasha at first, he seemed so OOC in a way. But now, I'm beginning to see where you're going with this and I really like it. Miroku and Kagura were another interesting pairing but totally believable in your story. I really like how you've portrayed Kagura - she's so interesting! Please keep writing - I can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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