| "The Babysitter" Reviews/Comments [ 170 ] |
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2013 01:27 EDT
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I loved your story, it was written very well and stayed interesting the whole time I am glad I stopped to read it. I also enjoyed the little food for thought comments, those were funny :D |
Title: ch.8
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2013 18:45 EDT
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awww this chapter was sooo cute!!!!! |
Reviewed By: shexshe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2012 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. One of my favorite fics of all time. I reread it at feel as if I'm reading it for the first itme. |
Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2009 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this story over and over and over again, and I must say that when your readers come back to you for the same thing... you're doing a pretty darn good job!!! ^__________^ I love the little awkward moments with Shiro and in almost every single chapter I have to laugh out loud! Every time I read this, I smile. I even have it printed out and in my nightstand to read when I've had a bad day. I absolutely love your food for thoughts and the end of each chapter! EXCELENT WORK!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story... i loved it!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 03:14 EDT
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"But Mama, I don't wanna punch the cow. I wanna sleep." lol.....ROFL
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Food for thought: As long as there are tests, There will be prayer in schools I loved that!!!
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Title: great ^ ^
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 16:04 EST
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I love this fanfic ^ ^ that was such an awsome fanfic you wrote once again. ^ ~ keep it up
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE story. I really liked it.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 02:19 EDT
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interesting story... really liked it... great work... good job...
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Title: Late but Not Forgotten...
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story so much and you're awesome for writing it... I'm hentai and personally wanted to read a few sexual moments between inu and kag but I can live with what i have... I loved the planning/plot that went into this- it seemed reasonable but also enjoyable! COOL STORY!
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Title: All done!
Reviewed By: InuSaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 14:02 EST
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Well, I just finished reading, after spending the last couple of days ignoring my own stuff. Good work, LD, I really enjoyed it. It was lighthearted and a very nice diversion. It made me smile, and laugh out loud several times. The characters were recognizable, and some of the characterizations were awesome. Kouga, for example. Yes, he was pushy, but not in the mad stalker rapist sort of way so many others favor when writing him. In fact, I laughed at times at how great he was in the story, as in what a wonderful person you made him out to be. It was refreshing that he was nice, but Kagome chose InuYasha because she loved him, not because her other options were too creepy to contemplate. That "Mama, I don't wanna punch the cow" line had me rolling. Also, the way Miroku kept getting beaten up by everyone was funny. But, if I had to offer any criticism, I noticed a punctuation error here and there, nothing major. I thought the adjective "gentle" was overused in the story, and the romantic buildup between InuYasha and Kagome at first seemed a little forced. He was very brash and rude and she didn't seem to mind. Of course, he grew on me, but I thought the romance at first was a little unbelievable. Other than that, the writing style was good, it flowed well, and the descriptive language was strightforward, which I prefer. I had no problem picturing what was happening, but there were no purple prose, which annoy the holy hell out of me. Overall, very good job. I haven't made it through most of the stuff I've agree to read lately, but this was a joy.
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Reviewed By: foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it! Took me a while to finish it, but it was worth it! ^.^
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 15:07 EDT
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this was a nice and cute fic.... enjoyed it alot
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Reviewed By: Jozz On: February 19, 2006 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story is all I can really say.If you do write other stories well I'll be looking for them.Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Jozz On: February 19, 2006 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story is all I can really say.If you do write other stories well I'll be looking for them.Please keep writing!
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Title: Kaglover1
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:30 EST
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As I continued down the story. I was wondering, KJagome is 19 and how old is Inuyasha even tough he is a father. Email me at kaglover1@hotmail.com
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Title: Kaglover1
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, at first when I read the title of this fic I thought this was going to be awful but when I read the first chapter, IT WAS AMAZING!!! It's way better than the other'babysitter'fics I've read. WOW! Keep up the awesome work!!!! (I am so crazy right now)
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Title: Kaglover1
Reviewed By: kaglover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, at first when I read the title of this fic I thought this was going to be awful but when I read the first chapter, IT WAS AMAZING!!! It's way better than the other'babysitter'fics I've read. WOW! Keep up the awesome work!!!! (I am so crazy right now)
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Reviewed By: Rami-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 20:24 EDT
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Wow. I read this such a long time ago and had to go back and read it some more. Sorry I didn't review the first time around but I did adre your story. ^^ Very cute and a nice take on a subject that seems over done. Yours stood out and you made the topic your own. Shiro is a doll. Thanks for the lovely read!
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 22:00 EDT
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I have to say that it's definately the innocence of Shiro that gives each chapter that extra radiance and that laughter. Personally, it makes me look on the story and think about all the knoweldge that has been bestowed upon me these years. With age comes wisdom they say. Please continue writing.
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:42 EDT
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INuyasha and kagome's "date" was wonderful. Packed with such fluffy moment I smiled through the whole thing. Their relationship seems to go at a normal pace. Not too sudden or slow. You did a great job in that.
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 21:02 EDT
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This story is sooo cute and adorable. The jokes go far in making me smile and laugh. You can't miss that it's rated low and well written. It's very nice that you can write so enthusiastically.
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Reviewed By: Sailor X [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGoodness! I looooooooooooooove this story. So Cute! No sex or overly horrible language and it had a cute little kid. As a mother myself (I'm 22), I can just imagine my daughter soon acting like Shiro. This was soooooooooooooo cute. Thank you for such a wonderful, heart-warming story! Many Inuyasha fics I've read are full of dirty/ pre-maritual sex and depressing themes. Good to know I know where to get all warm and fuzzy (reading your story). I laughed, I cried, I loved it!
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Reviewed By: queenserena(*sniff*) On: March 07, 2005 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wails*/Rin:*sniff*How can it be over!/*wails louder*
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Youkai.Danni On: March 07, 2005 15:54 EST
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Oh I am so happy yet sad at the same time I have finally finished your story. I am sad because it's done with but happy that it came out so beautifully. You have a real talent for this keep working at it and I bet you'll be a great published author when your older!
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Reviewed By: queenserena*claps* On: March 06, 2005 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bawls*/Rin:*sweatdrops*She's very sad.../HOW CAN YOU END!?/Rin:....
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: March 06, 2005 17:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spectacular! That was just simply amazing everything else pales in comparison to this marvalous story. Definatley sequel worthy. I'd give it at least a 50 out of 10 if I could.
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (Not logged in) On: March 06, 2005 11:57 EST
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That story is sequel worthy!! I loved it so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o much!! Everytime you updated I would get so excited! I luv Shiro. He is so cute! I really really really loved this story!!! Great Job!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 18:19 EST
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Here's a food for thought from me "If you're having a really bad day, and it just seems like people are trying to piss you off, just remember, it takes 42 muscles to frown, but only 4 to extend your middle finger and tell them 'Bite me!" Thought you'd like that one.
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