| "Seimei no Kakera: Shards of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hary On: September 18, 2004 10:35 CDT
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 21:02 CDT
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I LIKED THEM! just was a bit confused about the Nature Boy one. But they were cute. Especially LOVED Bottle.
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Title: Bottle
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tens all down the board! *rolls on floor laughing* OMG! That has got to be the funniest Inuyasha thing I have ever read! Its so perfect! Please write more soon! These are really good, ecspecially when its romantic and funny! Please write more soon! Thanks!
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Title: Nature boy
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, sad, and sweet but kinda confusing because I dont know if Inuyasha was talking about Kagome or Kikyo, but still really good.
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Title: Meow
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Makes sense, I talk to my dog all the time so why not talk to her cat. Very cute, ecspecially Buyo's thoughts while Kagome held him. Sometimes, I wonder what animals think of us as we hold, pet, play, or talk to them. ^_^
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Title: Flash
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering if there would be one centered around Sango and Miroku. Good, but maybe Im just really stupid or dense because I dont get what Miroku saw at the last part, o well!
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Title: Yellow Toy Truck
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute and sweet, well except for Inu-yasha's first career... a mass murderer, how would a kid that small know about stuff like that. O loved Inu-yasha's logic though; that cuz Kagome is his best friend, she does not have any cooties. *sighs* the sweetness that is a six-year-olds logic... ^_^
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Title: Herself
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sad but so good! I dont understand why she killed herself, but the last part makes sense; that Inu-yasha could save her from everything but herself... *cries*
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Title: Friends
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
short but nice, a kind thought on Kagome's part
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Title: Back
Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tee hee, who new a cute children's game could turn so naughty. Really good!
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Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:16 CDT
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;_; Ever sadder the second time. I read it on fanfiction.net, then here. *sniff* Poor, poor Inuyasha. . . *bursts into sobs and runs away*
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Title: Nature Boy & Bottle
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 15:55 CDT
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These latest two were excellent and I'm so glad you're upping the word count! More to read! Yay! Anyway, 'Nature Boy' was so sad! Man...poor Inuyasha...But to make up for it the 'Bottle' one was halarious! That really would be funny if Kagome really was alergic to dogs and the only way she could stand to be around Inuyasha was to take medication...hehe! What a funny image...Well, great job as usual! I'll be looking forward to more soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Saki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 14:41 CDT
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...Um. 'Nature Boy' is very sad... T___T I... don't know what to say. It was... I'm also slightly confused though... 'her'... well, since it's AU... 'her' was Kikyo, right? Or... was it Kagome? o_O;; And this is just another girl down the line who looks like Kagome? Or Kagome's reincarnation? =.=;; Bottle was sort of... weird. But funny. Who'd have guessed that Kags was allergic to dogs?! xD Haha... good job!
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Reviewed By: Unknown Fool [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 21:41 CDT
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This story rocks. I love wolves and werewolves, but most people think of them as evil. Like alot of your storys, this had a great combo of fluff, romance, action, angst, drama, and alot of other things I can't list. And like alot of your stories, or even poems, My eyes got something in them at the end. And I want to ask you about "Seeing is Deciving", but secnce it's not posted on mm.org yet I'll ask you here. Naraku said he was after Inu-Yasha. Well, what about Sesshoumaru? He's from the same father, right? So why wouldn't Naraku go after him as well? When Kikyo was dating him she could have told him about Inu's siblings. And why didn't Kikyo tell Naraku about Inu-Yasha about being hald werewolf? Love all of your stories and I hope you keep writting!! ~*~Uknown Fool~*~ P.S. Sorry for any spelling errors.
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Reviewed By: Unknown Fool [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are probly one of the most gifted writer i have ever seen. Just reading #3, herself, I started crying. Your stories are very touching, hilarious, and awesome. I'm kind of sad that you left ff.net, but at least you continued rigting. Later on I hope that you republish "If the slipper fits" cause that was a great story. Please keep writting. Unknown Fool
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