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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 19:49 CST
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i love this story and i really want to find out what's going on with the voices. please dont forget to update again soon. how about another chapter for thanksgiving.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 22:07 CST
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Ah! A new chapter! This is playing out in quite the interesting manner. I can't wait to read more. College can be tough, but hang in there! I thouroughly enjoy this story and I'm very glad you refuse to not finish it. Happy writings! ~Tori-chan
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 11:22 CST
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I'd read this a while ago but I just realized I didn't leave a review. I'm quite excited to see how the play goes and what the club members think of Yuki and Kyo's 'relationship.' I'm also kind of eager to see how that relationship develops while they're rehearsing for this play. I do rather love Midsummer Night's Dream. Hope college goes well for you and the holiday break gives you a bit of time to write! Thank you for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 15:57 CDT
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Again, nice work. And I apologize for waiting so long to review. You've set the floor for the next step in this "relationship", now we readers just have to wait for everything to "play" out. (catch the pun? :3) I know all about school work getting in one's way (junior year in high school @_@), so I'm not going to rush you with the next chappie. SCHOOL COMES FIRST!! Trust me, it's bad when you finish a chapter and then realize at 11:00 pm that you forgot to do your English essay... >.> Yeah, that sucked... So anyway, keep up the great work! Happy writings! ^_^ ~Tori-chan~ P.S. I'm no good at comedy (especially for Furuba), but maybe you'd like to check out one of my Furuba fics. They're kinda sad though. ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you're in college? Cool! And yet you still don't know the difference between "of" and "off"...
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: February 27, 2007 05:27 CST
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This is a cool story you got going here. Kagura is scary when she is angry. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: MomsDarkSecret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 19:18 CST
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Weak-willed, indeed. Glad to see you posted. I wonder that none of the girls remarked on Kyo defending Yuki, though...
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Reviewed By: Star Queen On: February 04, 2007 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!I LOVED this i hope you update this soon i really like yaoi and i write it also a few normal if you want to check it out look for my account Sessymate13 and you'll see my stories well JA! P.S.:and i reaaaaaaaaaally hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: xmoonlightx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 19:51 CST
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whoo..hurry with the rest^^
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Reviewed By: xmoonlightx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoo i love it..keep up the good work^^
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 09:36 CST
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O.O My god... The hotness... Sorry, I'm just a big fangirl of the YukiKyo pairing. ^^;;; The story is very well written thus far and I cannot wait until the next chapter is posted. I could only catch minor grammar errors (e.g. "of" instead of "off" but that could be a typo), making the story all the more excellent! ^_^ I have yet to see this idea used, so I can say that it is vey original. Keep up the great work! Happy writings from a fellow Furuba author! ~Tori-chan~
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Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 17:04 CDT
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O...k. PLAESE UPDATE PWITTY PEEEEZE? If you don't I will unleash my Yorkies upon you! They are very cute and demand constant belly-rubs.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonKiss On: January 28, 2005 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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The writing is a bit choppy. But I like the plot and heh, what can I say? Shounen ai kicks ass. I find the characters to be quite in-character though.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Gayness pretending... oo or will it become more... BUWAHAHAHAHHAHA!!! *Cough* Please update your cute fanfic. *Giggles* It's already got my attention
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:40 CDT
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they should use Aya's suggestion...and have that lead the boys into a real relationship....does that help
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