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| "Cruel Summer" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Title: review...
Reviewed By: jaxter_stargurl02 On: November 26, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Its a very beautiful fanfic. I've read hundreds of fanfics and this is really the BEST I've ever read! Seriously. Such deep and heart melting words.
| Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
| Title: Beware the ego inflating!
Reviewed By: Kurayami-Ryuu On: November 16, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@ That was not your first lemon. Couldn't be. Nah. I feel... I feel so young! I am talentless! I suck! Wah! T_T Lol... That was, without a doubt, the best lemon I have have ever read. And the way you protrayed the characters... absolutly flawless. And it takes real talent for me to praise someone's characterization of Yue; I'm very picky when it comes to him ^_~ Ubercoolness. And on a completely different note, I love that song - I think I'm going to have go explore my CD collection now. Hmm... Why haven't you writen anything else?! I refuse to believe that you haven't writen anything else; MediaMiner must just be skrewing up again... Must check ff.net... aff.net... etc., etc.,... More importantly, why aren't you published yet? Wait, maybe that's it -- you did get published, so now you don't have time for lowly fanfics anymore! T_T Lol... But seriously, this story reads like a romance novel, not a fanfic. I know there are people out there who would like to eat me for hinting that there's a major difference, but, eh, there tends to be. My writing being no exception. *tear* Well, I just went on a major rant, ne? Good writing tends to do that to me. I just can't inflate your ego enough, can I? Must go and... take a cold shower now... Buh bye!
| Reviewed By: PhantomDark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your story its really very good. i love these sort of storys between yue and sakura. but maybe one between lee and yue would be cool to.....nah lees not cute enough for yue....yues so hot!!!!!
| Title: @-@
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I need to take a COLD shower now.... ^^; Seriously that is the best lemon I have read.... In my reading of CCS lemons! It makes me want to cry with your wonderful writing ;-; you must write more! I am so gonna stalk you now >P muwhahahahahahaha Okay I am done now XP Your new stalker, @}'--- Sess
| Reviewed By: Keri On: October 06, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, every woman's wet dream. The emotionless, elusive (not to mention drop-dead gorgeous) man who is shrouded in mystery that only shows vulnerabilities and insecurities to you. Oh, and let's not forget the sex that can melt polar ice caps. I can't believe something that hot could POSSIBLY be your first lemon! I love Yue/Sakura stories, the two balance each other. I wish I could see how the others, especially overprotective Touya, take the new relationship (another lemon would be appreciated too).
| Reviewed By: The Honest Reader On: October 01, 2004 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I really enjoyed your fic. I haven't read a lot of CCS fics let a alone reading a lot with this couple in them. But i can't resist a tall-silver-haird-mysterious-type-character. It was very romantic and cute. It might be interesting if you continued it but sometimes a fic is better off being short and sweet. And that's just what it was, I simply drawn in by Yue's charm. Bye for now!
| Title: *drool*
Reviewed By: Echan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stares at screen blankly and wipes drool off of keyboard* Oh, my-fucking-God... THAT WAS BLOODY BRILLIANT!!! **SQUEALS** I absolutely love Yue and Sakura pairings- aside from her and Syaroan, of course, but this- THIS was the best fafiction of Yue/Sakura I have ever read before. Congrats to you, friend. Nice work and choice of title. I love Ace of Base, too. ^^ -Echan2
| Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Sailor_Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I've never read a Yue/Sakura lemon before, but I'm really glad I read yours. I read the other version of this at fanfiction.net, and even there I felt like it was missing something. The setting for a lemon was just right, but I understand why you dropped it out. Stupid ff.net and it's stupid rules. -_-; I am such a pervert sometimes. Anyway, your fic definitely seems more complete with the lemon in it, and I congratulate you on writing such a good one! Keep writing!
| Title: wow...
Reviewed By: akasume On: August 29, 2004 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... htat was your first lemon?!?! O.o.... damn.. That was extremly good. I really luved it ^_^. Dammit... my stories suck big time comparred to yours...I gotta start practising writing again ^_^;. I've been drawing most of the time lol. This is definently going to my favorites is fanfiction.net ^_^V This story was highly detailed and had really nice descriptive words ^_^. I praise you lol^_^. I look foward to reading more of your storys. I'm very happy that someon other than me likes sakura/yue...well, I'm sure that there are other people who like the pairing... @_@ oro.. oh well. You really captivated the characters personalities. I think I'm going to rewrite my fanfiction ^_^;... it sucks lol. Well, it looks like I'm rambling a bit so I'll end this review ^_^;; heheh. Keep on writing... you have REALLY great talent ^_^.
| Title: *fans self*
Reviewed By: Azurite [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, you've definitely got the lemon thing intact! *fans self with a wad of paper* Nice, and eloquently steamy, though I must admit I haven't read as far into CCS as you mentioned. There were a couple of lines that confused me, but I already mentioned those to you, so... I'm just going to tell you that it was great-- and I hope to see your excellent [lemon!] writing skills translate into more delectable stuff for Seto/Téa, who have so much UST, it oughta be bottled and sold. *grin*
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