Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 00:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a nice little story. Started strong, but lost some flavor and texture as you ended it. Almost like you were just wrapping up the story, not really completing it. Spelling -not so good. Many correctly spelled words in the wrong places, makes it very hard to read. Grammar - not so good either. Work on editing the story or get a reader to help you, it will improve and polish your writing.
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