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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Lunar_storm(tis me name here forgot to login xD) On: April 22, 2005 22:31 CDT
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you lil shit you better update soon and this better not have a bad ending or im gonna come down there and kick you butt xD (im just kidding lol)anywho it was a good chappy but i hate that there allways so short buttttttttttt ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm pwease up date sooner ttyl on msn Bethie
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 21, 2005 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww.... so sweet but what took ya so long?!?!?!?! well anywho i loved it keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Eartha (nsi) On: April 21, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Well...that was depressing. But of course he's not going to just leave her. He can't let Naraku have her. So, keep on writing, 'cause I want to see everything turn out okay.
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Title: NOOOOOOOO!!!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you finally updated! What a sad way to end the chapter! Please update soon, I can't take this!
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Reviewed By: gaelicvixen On: April 04, 2005 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
As has been said many times over, very original fanfic, and enjoyable to read. Just one nitpick. The Catholic Church wasn't responsible for the Salem Witch Trials, the Puritans, who happen to be Prods, shoulder the blame for that dark period in history. Not that the Church hasn't done some god-awful things -- e.g., the Crusades, the Inquisition -- but that little bit of nasty belongs to another set of religious fanatics.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good for the 1st part ^_^ write more soon ill be watching good luck bethie
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: essie2 On: February 14, 2005 11:41 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great update
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: kafeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy like this story! It's so diffrent!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: February 13, 2005 18:38 CST
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awww.... he saved her how sweet keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 04:02 CST
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I'm glad that they didnt die! This chapter was great, I had actually stoped breathing while I read! So I was kinda drowning down with them, and I didnt even notice until they broke through the ice and I gasped for breath. My heart is still pounding! Great chapter! I hope you get the other one up soon!
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Title: umm
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 23:24 CST
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so is that the end or what???? if it wasent then please please please update ^_^ i really wanna know what happends next ^_^ ttyl kuro p.s. email me please at my hotmail account so i get an awnser to my question.... my email is Robin592002@hotmail.com bye
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Reviewed By: rin-sama1989 On: October 26, 2004 16:12 CDT
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Please dont let them die! I'm not saying it wouldnt be a great tragic anding just if you do something like that just let it be further into the story. I just so love cliffhangers, they really catch me! Update soon! rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: VeRoN(nsi) On: October 24, 2004 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO...How could you leave it there???Oh my god!!Now I won't be able to sleep thinking what will happen!!!Damn Naraku!Creepy old man, I hate him, Kagome could be his daughter, what's the pervert's problem?? Anyway, amazing chappie, I loved it!Poor Inu having to recall Kikyo's death like that... Please update ASAP!!Can't wait to know for next chapter!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 19:20 CDT
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 18:23 CDT
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omg this is great please update
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