| "A World in a Grain of Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 03:45 CST
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ch.19 well that's really tough... I think the hard part is for Duo to realize that he missed the physical intimacy, having someone with him in that way that he shared albeit forced but not the forceful/controlling crap that came with it. But it's still hard to accept consider how much he was wronged, but circumstances could have been much worse... I can't wait to read more although i do dread this coming to an end. night
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Reviewed By: priscel - On: January 19, 2005 03:10 CST
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reading chapter 18 with first Snow Patrol playing 'Run', then Train playing 'Let it roll' ... it was a very sweet chapter and i hav to say i'm sorry to see it end in less than two... but I can so see it happening. Wow heero understands, he has come a long way from the obsessed man he was when he started his umm 'wooeing' of Duo.
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Title: ch14
Reviewed By: priscel-- On: January 19, 2005 01:44 CST
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oh well back to ground zero for heero, atleast Tro apologized but damn him he said Any'thing' worth heero's attention, Damn him Duo is not a Freakin' OBJECT! *bristles* I'm surprised Sally didn't glomp Heero!! And Hilde!!! She is not well at all, does she have the 'wasting sickness' (i can't recall the name but Hilde is displaying all the symptoms - thinning, pale..) or it could be the plague and to think she kissed Duo!
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Reviewed By: priscel- On: January 18, 2005 10:54 CST
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Ch5.. man can we say obssessed! Heero is a haunted man but he keeps thinking about possessing Duo, seducing him so he can have him and not reflect more that Duo has feeling just like anyone else, that prehaps he should consider apologizing for what he did ... *sighs* if he apologizes I doubt that he would mean it because he liked forcing, controlling Duo, he must have or he wouldn't have made done it in the first place! He needs to see his errors and make amends with Duo *shakes her head* Quat was such a bastard! Duo told him weren't a slave, he could have atleast checked it out before he had him bound to Yuy's bed like some new bed ornament! I think Wufei has changed Quat because He didn't call duo a slave when they were alone with him in the temple, but trowa did... *growls* Gotta read more! Oh I like your relena, not the obssessed princess in this one.
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: January 18, 2005 09:19 CST
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Wow!... i'm only on chapter 1 and damn this is good.
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Reviewed By: dragon23 On: October 27, 2004 14:03 CDT
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good to see u've updated. It would haveb been a shame if U didn't.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 26, 2004 21:00 CDT
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Keep up the good job and update soon!
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Reviewed By: sara chan On: October 25, 2004 11:24 CDT
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only god/s know HOW I've been waiting for a new chapter to come up.
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Title: deunank
Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story. I like Duo and Heero a lot. And you did a good job with Quatre, I really wanted to kick him. I actually feel more bitter than Duo about the whole situation - I think he should have stayed angry with Quatre longer. The point that Duo could have ended up in a worse situation than with Heero was interesting though. Quatre didn't take the best path and send Duo back to his home, but he did keep him from the sailors. I still hate Quatre and Heero (to a lesser extent), but I can understand why Duo accepts the apologies.
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Title: Well done.
Reviewed By: Mitra(Not MM.org member) On: September 18, 2004 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
congratulations, you've actually succeeded in producing an highly enjoyable work. I recommend it to 1x2 fans.
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Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very nice. More updates! :)
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Reviewed By: F.D .O On: September 02, 2004 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I sure as hell enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: sara chan On: August 31, 2004 11:16 CDT
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It's nice to see that you've started posting on MM org as well. it's very practical in my opinion as I visit this site more ferquently then ff net.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 14:05 CDT
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I'm glad you are posting this here and still updating. I've always been fond of this story and the slowly developing relationship between Duo and Heero. If it weren't for their history, they would already be a couple, and I think you bring that out well. I notice no one seems particularly sorry for how Duo was treated; even Une admits she could have been nicer. Poor Hilde... still, you laid the ground work well and I was expecting it.
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Title: Amazing work
Reviewed By: dragon23 On: August 30, 2004 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the first time I see a fic like this. it's far from the usual master and slave fic. keep the good work up. it's a fic worth reding.
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