| "Tohru-Kun's Hat" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Explanations
Reviewed By: Crystal5 On: September 09, 2004 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, to people who've reviewed so far, Yuki gave the hat to Tohru, buy it was Kyo's hat to begin with. It's only confusing because they both believe that they were the ones that gave her the hat (essentially). If its confusing, it'll become a little clearer in the next chapters, okies?
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Reviewed By: SaVaY [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am quite confused. In the first chapter you made it seem like Kyo gave her the hat, but in the second it seems like Yuki did it. Please make it clearer and keep your story straight. Just a suggestion^_^.
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
you lost me! isn't it kyou who gave toru the hat?
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Reviewed By: Kyo Sohma On: September 06, 2004 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read up to book 4 and at the end of the book Kyo sits and looks at Tohru and then u see the boys face and it looks just like a young Kyo But anyways I like your story alot I just wish it was Kyo cause Tohru and Kyo coupling is so cute!
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Title: The Hat
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like what you have! I'm not sure either if it was Yuki or Kyo that gave Tohru the hat when she was small...the way the manga-ka writes it, it's like it could be either! I personally think it was Kyo, but who knows?? ^_^
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Title: I like what you have so far
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 01:08 CDT
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I've only gotten up to vol. 4, so I'm not sure if the guy is Yuki or Kyo, but it's a good story! I'll put this in my favorites so when you update, I'll know! ^_^
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