| "Sloppy Seconds" Reviews/Comments [ 198 ] |
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Title: *laugh*
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughing* oh my god.sesshomaru laughing,that's not something you hear everyday.sooooooo that thing on sesshomaru's shoulder isn't a tail? i always thought it was.anyway good chapter! update again soon!
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Title: Sloppy Seconds
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 21:51 CDT
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Oh My God, you had them barking at each other. I laughed so hard, I thought I was going to pee my pants. Thank you, Thank you so much. A little humor goes such a long way in a situation like this. I love this fic, and I really enjoy that your muse is allowing you to update so fast. Cudo's to you. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 17:19 CDT
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this is great fanfic please update soon lol lol barking
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 11:15 CDT
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and i wouldnt havew expected for Sango to have hentai thoughts because that was Houshi-samas job. Inuyasha just had to go overboard with the 'strawberry ice cream' trick. LOL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^. ARIGATOU?!?!?!?!
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Title: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501
Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 11:11 CDT
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UPDATE SOON OR ELSE I SHALL RIP OUT YOUR ORGANS. WOOF WOOF, YIP, ARF. IM TELLING YOU THAT WAS JUST TOO DAMN FUNNY FOR ME TO HANDLE.
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Title: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501
Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Puppy boy and Fluffy were actually talking to eachother without fighting and then laughed. DAMN that was too funny. See now you made my stomach hurt.
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 23:34 CDT
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Woof! Yip! Ruff! That was just oo funny. And Kagome standing up to Sessy even though she was by herself. I liked how Sessy pointed out about Kagome being Inuyasha's mate (or intended) Then the last couple of comments were pretty funny too. This is a great story I hate to say it I am glad you have the end planned out I always seem to have trouble with that I have several WIP that I have not updated in like forever. Even and HP multiple xover (mainly elements of BtVS) that somehow Inuyasha managed to sneak into. Anyway update soon this is a great story
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Reviewed By: aim snap fall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i loved it, please update soon!
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this story is sooooooooo good!i really do love it,but he feels bad about leaving her and then he's going to run to kikyo? i know that he has to get her to fight naraku but dose he have to be so lovey dovey? well it IS your story so do what you want to do,just please update again soon! i'm dieing to know what happens! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Evil Cliffhanger Factor 10 of 10 Is this cliffhanger a good thing or a bad thing? -- Bad, very, very bad... so, I know his "plan" was to do what he usually does when she is around, but damn... just run into her arms without a single word! Nice one, Inu-baby... not! Lack of communication is still a factor, even if he has somewhat lightened up... hell that positive side of him didn't last very long, ne? *chuckles* Sess should turn up now while he is off with the dead only to arrive to find his brother and miko together-alone-her in tears-him holding her-stroking her hair-soothing her-sneering at him… HA! That was evil of me! *Gasps* oh well, he actually deserves a scare, even if harmless and OOC. Karma, that's what he needs! Some dog-go fetch a bone, in your face, blow it out of your ass, KARMA! * By the way, Houjo and Kouga? 0.o; lol now that is scary! no scratch that, it's damn-right-near… hysterical! Could you imagine; *Pauses for thought* wait, he doesn't take a hint, he's dense; beautiful yet boring… eh, the perfect factor destroys the Houjo/Kouga thing, though I would laugh my ass off to her Houjo claim Higurashi as his woman!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 00:14 CDT
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this is a great please update soon
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 00:13 CDT
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It's so sad but it's really good.
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 23:19 CDT
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Instead, he found Kikyo resting on a log in a clearing and rushed into her waiting arms. WHAT THE HECK IS HE DOING?!?!?! GGGRRRR!!!!! Damn him!!!! He is such a Baka, Baka, BAKA!!! I know he has to talk to her to get her help with naraku but does he have to RUSH INTO HER ARMS?!?! Stupid hanyou. Poor Kagome it would actually be pretty cool if Sessy showed up and Kagome talked to him while Inuyasha was off 'rushing into some dead womans arms'. The way it is going she is never ever going to believe he loves her or that she would be 'first'. Kagome will always be comparing herself and if it gets too bad she will might even start acting like Kikyo if Inuyasha chooses Kagome then Kagome might think she has to be more like Kikyo to keep him or something. You never know how somone's mind works. Anyway great story!!! Can't wait for the next update
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Title: THAT WAS FANTASTICO!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, damn Kikyo. ALways being in the way. But I must say, way to leave a cliffhanger. *nudges elbows* eh eh. That sounded wrong. Anyway, liek I said last time. REALLY great story, I keep getting updated and your story is just the one I keep wanting. Oh, and by the way, TAHT WAS SO COOL! You put me in your chapter. Plus, you are needed, just Like I needd your story and you story needs you. HAR! I am confusing myself. GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Chuckles* who would believe it, our hanyou is a lecher, albeit a discreet one, but still a closet hentai!!! The ol' ice-cream seduction technique, lol, and Sango having her own hentai thoughts lol, i loved that bit! *Groans* Houjo means well, i am not a fan of him, but damn does he ever take the hint! God, even someone as dense as Inuyasha figured out Kagome was uninterested in his advances! lol, hell now that is a scary revelation!!!!! Great update, nice knowing he hasn't reverted to cold hanyou attitude toward her, but surprised us all (including her) that he has lightened up more so and we discover his secret lecherous ways! Look forward to more!
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