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| "Reflections" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: BlueFolly10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 01:24 CST
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I feel rather remiss in not having reviewed this earlier in my reading, as I've been consistently awed by the depth of character and complexity of plot you've so artfully woven. It's incredibly refreshing to read a piece of fiction entirely willing to engage with the quirks and inconsistencies of a particular fandom, rather than shying away from them in an attempt to create an all too easy "happily ever after." I've found that stumbling across a well-planned, well-researched piece of fanfiction is all too rare, and as such, this is a real treat. Many, many thanks for all of your hard work. I greatly look forward to what's to come. Cheers!
| Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 06:59 CST
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yay!!! you came back! oh, but this chapter was so painful...for me, anyway, since i want everyone to love your aya, and they're on the verge of casting him out. i wonder how well they think they're going to function if aya's not with them. jerks! i suppose i can understand their concerns, but it doesn't seem practical for them to just wash their hands of him. he's too valuable, even if he isn't chopping heads off. he's also too sexy. he and ken need to have more sex. mmm, aya-sex...sorry, got sidetracked. anyway, i really enjoy your work and i hope your muses will inspire a faster update this time. i'm glad you are still planning on finishing this! love, redqueen
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Absolutely breathtaking, from the incredible action at the beginning to the different kind of even more breathtaking action at the end -- with plenty of twists and turns in between. How you so adroitly managed to mix in history and philosophy into this chapter already dense with content, is amazing. Each character was wonderfully depicted, as was each action and plot development. Please, please come back soon.
| Reviewed By: Flamingolob On: April 03, 2005 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow (lol, I couldn't resist jumping on the 'wow' bandwagon again), really wow. This fic just keeps getting better and better. Nicely done, I'm enjoying the complexities of Aya's character and the interaction between him and Ken. Smashing plot, you've clearly put a lot of thought and research into the details, creating an extremely realistic atmosphere. Loving this, and looking forward to seeing more from you.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I loved the tender, calculating Aya who could chuckle; Ken's response to same; and the careful mission planning. Poor Honey! You had me on the edge of my seat as Ken entered and explored, and like Aya wanted to scream to Ken not to try opening that next door. What a wonderful mix of emotions, drama, tense plotting, and character development. Please, please return soon and let us know what happens next. If Aya left to himself to rescue the others (and please let Ken be able to recover), I can't imagine how he will cope (yes, if anyone can, he can, but with his ongoing trauma . . . .) And whatever is happening to Yoji and Omi?! Thank you for this chapter, more soon please.
| Reviewed By: Flamingolo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 16:26 CST
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Oh wow, this fic is incredible. Outstanding work, I especially love the anti-cliche plot...every time I'm certain I know where you're headed, you knock me on my ass. Smashing language, too, you've captured an excellent balance of beautiful, but not overly complicated descriptions. Dialogue is also superbly realistic; Yohji in particular just kept striking a chord with me for being perfectly IC by what he says and how he manages to manipulate those around him. I also loved the direction you took with Aya's isolation causing him to grasp at any form of contact, which he found in the book. And that you didn't use the similarity of appearance between Kenshin and Aya as the driving factor for his brainwashing...*falls over dead*. Out-freaking-standing that you neglected the obvious thought with that and manipulated the situation to make it more believable still. Excellent characterizations, I look forward to more from you!
| Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 09:07 CST
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Wow, I am so glad I ran across this story, it's just incredible! I started reading this late yesterday and it took me several hours to get through all the chapters you have, then a few hours sleep so that I could leave you a coherent and semi intelligent review. I'm not normally the type to pick up on plot twists and innuendos and all that, but I did pick up on one thing and I'm curious to know if anyone else did... How much of a sensualistic person Ken is. Or if anyone realized just how much he responds to touch... To tell the truth I noticed because I'm the same way. And if I'm reading this correctly, because Yohji has seen how Ken responds to touch he's now seeing the resident klutz in a whole new light, just like Ken is noticing Yohji. Yet also it seems that they are all responding to Ken at all different levels, it's almost unreal! This response poor Ken can't quite understand, so it's keeping him so off balance! So when is Yohji going to make his move? He's the only one left to not kiss Ken into a boneless puddle of desire and lust. He's gotta be wondering what it's like, after seeing what that does to Ken. Well, he can't do anything about that at the moment, considering he's being held hostage with Omi. Yes, I do believe that's what's happening right now. But something still isn't sitting right with me. Kritiker backing out, just as Ken made Honey make that call? Manx saying they're on their own... one of the offices hit by the thugs? It doesn't make sense! Those offic | Reviewed By: Nitelyfe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, when I first glanced at this fic's summary so many months ago, I was initially turned off thinking that it was going to follow the usual trite and over done plot lines that were full of holes and barely coherent. Now that you've updated again, I took another look and was thrillingly suprised to find a more unconventional approach to the series. I LOVE this story and I'm dying for more. You've obviously given a great deal of thought into building the plot and into the character development and the result is fantastic! Just when I thought I'd never come across another serious work in this series, I'm absolutely delighted by this one. Especially how you've treated Kritiker as something less than some mysteriously omnipotent force, the more realistic treatment of what would go into a mission, not just a quick and easy 'oh they beat up some bad guys and saved the day'. Wonderful, wonderful job. Keep it up! I can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, you returned, and what a return! Very powerful, and beautifully written. I hope you can return quickly with more -- with this much needed cathartic release, and character insight, there remains the question of what is happening to Yohji and Omi, and will Aya and Ken be successful in their rescue attempt.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story: lots of twists and turns to keep us guessing, but not so many that they distract from the flow of the story. Great insight and development of the characters. I am very anxious for more, please come back soon.
| Reviewed By: CassyLee On: November 22, 2004 23:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: Darkanger On: October 19, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still hooked. I get so excited seeing an update. I just can't wait to see what else you can think up that seems to defy common fanfic plot tactics. Its an interesting view through Ken's head. Bravo!
| Title: great plot!
Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely interesting! Can't wait to see what happens. Very well written too. All the characters are pretty nicely defined. Aya's interaction with Benson was convincingly creepy. I hated Benson on sight. Really liked the teammates' reactions to that also. The scene with the chips felt very natural, in particular Omi's embarrassment and comments.
| Reviewed By: Cassey23 On: September 23, 2004 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Update!! Update!!! What's going on with Aya??!
| Reviewed By: indentured On: September 08, 2004 16:59 CDT
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wo! wtf???! ...srry. plz excuse the language...but seriously...'not aya'??? omg, this is getting good!~wheee, i never liked AU so much! aside from that, ur writing is really something impressive; truly commendable. one can see ur abilty n the essay like intro u added to chapter 2--very nice. anyways, plz continue with story, ill b looking out for chappy 3!~^____^~
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