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Title: Beta
Reviewed By: CheshireAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 13:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I replied to your post on Sue's site about needing a beta. I really like this story, and I'd be happy to beta for you if you'd like. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Beta
Reviewed By: CheshireAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I replied to your post on Sue's site about needing a beta. I really like this story, and I'd be happy to beta for you if you'd like. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 12:24 PST
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*sigh* Another wonderful chapter... I love how you're weaving the story, giving us a brief respite before making us wonder once more... ^^
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 22:16 PST
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I think that this story deserves A LOT more than 71 chapters! Why do all you wonderful writers have to make me bawl to the point where I get headaches in your stories? Lol, don't worry it is a good thing though. I love the angst you have with the characters; especially with Kagome and InuYasha. Although, I do miss Shippou, I can understand why it was needed to have him die in teh story because it was part of the plot on Kagome's part. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next update; and I have to thank Sue for recommending this story because it is awesome!!
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 19:53 PST
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Awww... This chapter was so sweet... I have to say, even though I'm all gung-ho for the angst and all, it's nice to have a fluffier chapter once in a while. ^^
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 11:05 PST
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So sweet! Fluffy! Fluffy's good, and I loved the little 'interlude' though I think that there might be more angst on the way, ne? Very cute fic, and I'm looking forward to reading more! Keep up the great work! Glad you're updating again!
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Title: =D
Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 01:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently started reading this, and by the time I got to chapter 21 I was so sure that Hiroshi was Inuyasha and Kagome's son. heh, I was waaaaay off the mark. Yours is a very interesting and well written story, awesome work!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 23:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just finished reading your fic up to chap. 22 and i'm in love! poor inu and kag. the reluctance of divulging their( well inu's) emotions to one another totally makes this story. you know, it's really not so ooc if you look at how they act towards eachother in the anime/manga. i can't wait for the next update and i'm for sure putting you on my fav's list. one more thing... is it just me or does hiroshi seem like a certain kitsune we all know and love. a reincarnation , maybe. sorry, that's probably waaaay off! bye 'till next time.
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Reviewed By: Kicnlus_inuforeva(too lazy to log in) On: June 26, 2005 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter, I really loved it! Wow - Hiroshi was a youkai???? THAT was unexpected! But it was GREAT! I hope you update soon! ^^
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Title: Ch. 22
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 11:30 PDT
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Have I ever mentioned how much I like Kagome's mother? She's so wise and gentle, playful and loving...and I can never figure out why in the world she lets her 15 year-old daughter go haring off with a handsome hanyou into the dangerous past to confront even more dangerous villians!! Is it trust in her daughter? Trust in InuYasha? Both or none of the above? *sigh* I wouldn't even let my own niece in our front yard to play. That kind of permissiveness...well, my mother let me stay gone all day, but I was trustworthy and was always where I'd said I'd be or I'd call her if plans changed. Hmm...I know I couldn't do it. Hats off to you, Mrs. H! -- Oh, InuYasha has been following Kagome around. And he still hasn't figured out a way to show Kagome his feelings. He's so painfully shy at times. He needs to 'pull up his socks' and be bold for a change. He's aggressive enough when confronting huge monsters and wonderfully decisive amid deadly situations...time to put all that energy and drive to fight his embarrassment; it's time.
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Title: Ch. 21
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 11:15 PDT
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Hiroshi is back...and I'm beginning to wonder about him. He's turning into a bit of an enigma. O.o?!?! Hiroshi is Youkai?? Hmm...the plot thickens.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 11:04 PDT
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*Hanyou smirk* "Oi! Maybe you should look before you grope next time...Bouzu!" Hehe, I couldn't resist. -- Kagome seems to have crawled out of her 'funk' but InuYasha knows she's still disturbed, especially about his feelings for her, or rather his supposed lack thereof. She has always had this martyr-thing going on, feeling second-best to Kikyou in InuYasha's heart. Yes, she was his first love, and first loves always have a special place in someone's heart...as it should be. But first does not always mean best. InuYasha needs to find a way to show her just how much she does mean to him...in a way she can't mistake. -- Oooh, I'm all a-quiver with anticipation! LOL
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Reviewed By: Kumoritora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... this is one awsome story. Tho you've probably heard that a lot, it is very true. lol You write really well, and you're really good at putting a lot of emotion in your writing. You made me start crying when i read about shippou, kirara and keade's deaths! Thanyou so much for writing this fic and i'm really hoping you'll update soon!!!!!
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Title: *loud whistle*
Reviewed By: KatieTakesflight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 09:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! In truth I've only read through chapter four but WOW, nonetheless. You are impecable at capturing the emotions of the characters. Another strong point of this work is the skill with which believably you discribe Kagome's psychological delima (SP). Many who attempt more "Cerbral" stories come off sounding pretentious. You do not. Also, you have a great facility with language and this definatly helps keep the story interestng and engaging. There are only two critisms I have of this, please do not take offense to them, I only say this because I would like to see you improve upon your already exceptional skill. The first thing is that the chapters are a bit short. It feels as if as soon as I get into the meat of it the chapter is over. The second thing is that you spend a lot of time discribing emotions that would be better shown using examples of character actions (this is basically the old show don't tell thing). Other than that great job and keep up the fantastic work. I look foward to reading more of your work in the future. Ciao!
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 22:35 PDT
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You do a very good job in representing the emotions, focusing in on Kagome's dispair, love, and guilt. However, even though you can write this part of the story now, you cannot write off Naraku and InuYasha and Kagome's first kiss within a couple sentances. (If you do cover it in a chapter later than three I apologize.) The style of the writing flows well, but some things happen without ryme nor reason. Some more character description would help as well. Good work and keep submitting to FFARG
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