| "Will of One's Heart: Can it Bring You Home?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: that was good On: January 22, 2005 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Ilike it... but what Ansem did to poor poor Riku that *sniff*he did. I HATE HEM MORE THAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That part made me cry it`s because Riku was in so much pain that made me cry I SEAR IF I HADE A KEYBLADE AND THIS WAS REAL I WOULD KICK HIS ASS AND MAKE HIM NEVER FORGET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...But don`t mind me you make yoyr story *sniff* BYE BYE!.^-^.
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Reviewed By: riku's girl On: September 05, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i loved it!keep it up.please do even tho i'm the only one that reads it.if i review alot ppl will see that s a good fan fic and come!
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